Excellent work! Love the voice. I don't think you ended the song too abruptly. I wouldn't change a thing. I hope you're planning on releasing this on your own album or something. I wish I could have the song on my itunes. I want to show people my discovery!
Hi br1ttany. Thank you for your very kind comments. I'm glad that you enjoyed the track. I am planning an album at the moment. If you have soundcloud you can follow me on there. There's even an extra track (Devil in my Skin) that I haven't featured on looperman. Here's a link to my page:
on The Deep Dark by toastedavalanche
https://soundcloud.com/toastedavalanche
Thanks again.
TA