I don't mean to be rude. But I felt that... the kick was a little overused. In your drops it was just overcompressing the song. I'd either use less kicks, try for another rhythm on the drums, keep the note and chord progression. This will ensure that your melody gets out there.
on Letters by Livingsoulsdie
on Fairy Roads Updated by MGproduct
I Work Very Fast To Produce New Track Its My Mistake .
Fruity Dreams I Hope MG 9 A 2015