One thing I'd change is I wouldn't fade the main idea out for the sample; either keep it in, and heavily effect it so it's WAY in the background, or just cut it out. With the two fades so close together, it sounds like this is a sample track of multiple songs.
Great sense of structure, great mix, too. The ONLY thing I'd do differently would be to bring the bass up a bit in the mix, and play lower notes (if that's an option to you).
I am glad you said that about the bass, and I totaly agree. As I have been trying to teach myself to make decent sounding music, I would create a short sample and record it to CD and see how it sounded on a couple different stereos. It always seemed the bass was just overwhelming so I knew I should lower it below what I thought it should sound like, but in the end I realize that I have over compensated. Thank you for saying so, because I know I am not the only one that hears that now.
on Shwanky by irkano
on The Time Between by 36Chambers
One thing I'd change is I wouldn't fade the main idea out for the sample; either keep it in, and heavily effect it so it's WAY in the background, or just cut it out. With the two fades so close together, it sounds like this is a sample track of multiple songs.
on leader deciever by FaithInSound
I'd add some horns or vocals for something more of a melody and hook, but all in all, this is awesome.
on Piece of My Soul by RayKoefoed
Great sense of structure, great mix, too. The ONLY thing I'd do differently would be to bring the bass up a bit in the mix, and play lower notes (if that's an option to you).
Keep up the good work. :)
I am glad you said that about the bass, and I totaly agree. As I have been trying to teach myself to make decent sounding music, I would create a short sample and record it to CD and see how it sounded on a couple different stereos. It always seemed the bass was just overwhelming so I knew I should lower it below what I thought it should sound like, but in the end I realize that I have over compensated. Thank you for saying so, because I know I am not the only one that hears that now.