The guitar wasn't played by myself, but by denyjanuary here on looperman. The link to original track is in the description if you'd like to listen to it without me wailing on :)
So I like the idea here and great job with the work you've done! However I do have some pointers to forward you production capabilities. I don't usually comment in depth analysis but I'm feeling helpful today haha
1. Flow: You seem to have to concept of flow and song structure. I like that you have a synth that gradually builds into your drums and vocal mix. You also have distinctive turning points throughout the track that establishes the build, drop, breakdown, and end. I'd suggest smoothing these transitions slightly more to give a much better flow to this work.
2. Key signature: While listening to this I noticed NOTHING fits in key and this also impacts the flow. I also noticed that you used many loops from off here and it's great to use Looperman as versatile tool in your work, but you have to be careful with the different keys. Make sure that if you are going to use synths and vocals in unison they fit well together.
3. Mixing: The mixing of audio files could use some improvement, but the main focus should be on the key sig. and flow of the track. This is a personal preference but I am a fan of "ducking" or also known as sidechaining your kick to the synth it is playing over. Also make sure that each frequency range is well balanced meaning there isn't too many high mids or lows, and that they all balance together for a nice and neat mix. Dubstep is a tricky genre of EDM to mix and master because the tones and frequency ranges are exaggerated and pass many boundaries in respect to other electronic based genres.
Overall nice work. Once you learn the basic concepts to the structuring and arrangement I have high hopes for your production skills, I hope to hear more!
That gated synth is so pleasant to the ears, and that short smooth transition from the breakdown to the last drop was very smooth. A technique I love, which you used nicely, is when songs switch from a four to the floor kick pattern to a hip hop/trap like beat.
My only critique would be to either lower the gain of the kick at 1:05 and to also maybe EQ the kick itself to remove the unneeded extremely low frequencies just to clean it up
But overall this piece is very nice and I can't wait to hear more, great work!!
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The guitar wasn't played by myself, but by denyjanuary here on looperman. The link to original track is in the description if you'd like to listen to it without me wailing on :)
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1. Flow: You seem to have to concept of flow and song structure. I like that you have a synth that gradually builds into your drums and vocal mix. You also have distinctive turning points throughout the track that establishes the build, drop, breakdown, and end. I'd suggest smoothing these transitions slightly more to give a much better flow to this work.
2. Key signature: While listening to this I noticed NOTHING fits in key and this also impacts the flow. I also noticed that you used many loops from off here and it's great to use Looperman as versatile tool in your work, but you have to be careful with the different keys. Make sure that if you are going to use synths and vocals in unison they fit well together.
3. Mixing: The mixing of audio files could use some improvement, but the main focus should be on the key sig. and flow of the track. This is a personal preference but I am a fan of "ducking" or also known as sidechaining your kick to the synth it is playing over. Also make sure that each frequency range is well balanced meaning there isn't too many high mids or lows, and that they all balance together for a nice and neat mix. Dubstep is a tricky genre of EDM to mix and master because the tones and frequency ranges are exaggerated and pass many boundaries in respect to other electronic based genres.
Overall nice work. Once you learn the basic concepts to the structuring and arrangement I have high hopes for your production skills, I hope to hear more!
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My only critique would be to either lower the gain of the kick at 1:05 and to also maybe EQ the kick itself to remove the unneeded extremely low frequencies just to clean it up
But overall this piece is very nice and I can't wait to hear more, great work!!
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