This is actually pretty tight! The guitar gives is a kinda eerie atmosphere lol at one point it becomes kinda hard to hear the vocals but besides that I love it!
I do like that your lyrics are focused and to the point so we know you mean business, but I feel like you could throw more emotion into the chorus. You definitely have potential tho :)
I added those lyrics I was talking about, I kinda rushed thru the process so its nothing amazing but give me some feedback, its on my profile titled 'State Of Elevation'
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