davesmith1983

davesmith1983

Nottingham, United Kingdom
Joined : 25th May 2008 - 17 years ago
davesmith1983 comments on tracks

davesmith1983 has posted 158 comments on other peoples tracks.

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davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 23:55 - 15 years ago

on Morning Glories by rfalkenburg
No do take it as a compliment, i could quite easily listen to this after a heavy night out! :)
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 23:34 - 15 years ago

on Morning Glories by rfalkenburg
Dosen't really do much, but it quite a laid back relaxing track.
rfalkenburg
rfalkenburg replied Unknown
Thanks for stoppin' by, and I will take that as a compliment, since I was trying to make a laid back relaxing track, compared to my other stuff.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 23:25 - 15 years ago

on Crashtest by Aplus
I've always been in two mind about dubstep, i love thoughs big fat bass lines, but i have everything else about it! :)
As for this track u've made a right fat bass, it sound sweet. what have u done? is it just a couple off squares with loads of lfo and filtering?
Also what vst r u using, is it moog by any chance?
Aplus
Aplus replied Unknown
I used "Massive" VST also I experiment to get my basses so I don't really remember how I just listend and improve ^^
Thanks for listening!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 23:20 - 15 years ago

on chiptune song needs a vocalist by dylanbrochill
quite a quirky track this, i wouldn't bother with vocals in it, i would just really foces on the pacussion, and really play with the main lead with fx's.
I do like what you've done so ar though.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 21:50 - 15 years ago

on Dancing Bells by Asvard
Its quite an unusal track, but it's not too bad at all.
The percussion wasn't all that great, u sould of varied it a little more.
Some off the synth and riffs are quite simiular to nathen fakes style (which is a good thing)but wasnt to sure about that wobbing synth or what ever it was, i would drop that and keep the rest.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Aug 2010 11:33 - 15 years ago

on Rocking music (Vocal bub) by centricomen
nice track some nice synths and pacussion within the song although ur riff got a bit to repetitive after a while though.
centricomen
centricomen replied Unknown
Thanks for the review and the criticism (lol). Appreciate the support

Centric out
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 12th Jul 2010 21:54 - 15 years ago

on Computer Technology by JasonXeasify
Is this one track? intresting! i don't think it works with fading in and out, it makes the track sound confused! Still at least ur tying something diifrent and u also have some nice little melodys and good choise of synths within the track!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 12th Jul 2010 21:39 - 15 years ago

on Thabang - Mid Nigth Love by Thabang
Some off the melodys are quite catchy in this track, but if im gona be honest, i would say that the synths u have chosen are pretty pants, i would also build on what pecussion u already have, but like u said you've only spent a few hour on it so far, so with a bit more time u could probally improve this ten fold, cos it's a good start, what you've done so far!

Keep up the good work djs!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 12th Jul 2010 16:08 - 15 years ago

on needed you by djdaddio
This is a great track, very peaceful and relaxing!
well done mate!
djdaddio
djdaddio replied Unknown
appreciate it thanks again take care D.:0)
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 11th Jul 2010 21:53 - 15 years ago

on What is Infinite by DJVO
I ment to review this track earlier but was a bit busy, i couldn't not leave a review after listening to it though! This is a fantastic track, u really have a good ear for catchy melody, has some real sweet pacussion and nicely structured!
Double thumbs up on this mate and fav! :)
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 11th Jul 2010 21:45 - 15 years ago

on Gavin A - That Sound by Zooloo75
Really liking the track, has a real nice flow start to finish, some sweet fx'ing going on there aswell! keep up the good wrk!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 11th Jul 2010 19:27 - 15 years ago

on Space Odyssey by gigionap
nice track but i would have to agree with u there are way to many small riffs going on, maybe u sould limit them to 1 or 2 riffs and have a catchy melody on top. but for what it is, its not to bad you've chosen some nice syths for the track and i'm sure with a bit more work it could be very good! anyway keep up the good work!
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 7th Jun 2010 13:23 - 15 years ago

on Murcs - A Perfect World (Original Mix) by Murcs
Good track here mate, some nice sidechaining with your main melody.
Also very crisp and clear! What do you use to master your tracks with?
Keep up the good work.
Murcs
Murcs replied Unknown
ey thanks man, i used just fl studio stuff like fruity parametric EQ 2, fruity compressor etc, this might show u a bit more what i did to make it :) www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rh4bcZ7xmd4
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 5th Jun 2010 19:40 - 15 years ago

on Another Stage (original mix) by RodrigoAssa
Quite simple but i tinnk it works really well, i really like the part where u add the swing , it really changes the groove.
Nice wrk m8!
RodrigoAssa
RodrigoAssa replied Unknown
daves thanks, glad you liked it. hug
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 5th Jun 2010 18:24 - 15 years ago

on Activate Edit by DrLoopy
You have some good synths going on in this track, quite basic but sometimes basic can be better.
It would work well in a tech house set.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 3rd Jun 2010 00:57 - 15 years ago

on Lee CoombsTechFunky by DjRocki
Good track m8, some nice sidechaining with the bass.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 2nd Jun 2010 17:47 - 15 years ago

on fun house by RicoB
Good track m8, you've got some nice fat base going on. What did u use? sounds very moogish tho!
Anyway nice work on this one, fav.
RicoB
RicoB replied Unknown
hey dave. i used nexus for the bass. i have the xp bass pack on my nexus2. so it has a lot of good presets. i am still new in the plugins, so i dont know how to build up a nice fat bass "yet" ;)
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 1st Jun 2010 23:14 - 15 years ago

on Madrush - Fatal 303 by Madrush
Any more off that and my head will explode! :)
Madrush
Madrush replied Unknown
Haha :D That we call Hardcore :P
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 1st Jun 2010 15:13 - 15 years ago

on Last To Die by Bierre
Not it to my metal at all really, but this is really good.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 30th May 2010 23:32 - 15 years ago

on monotonia by disco
Good choise in daw, i've been using ableton for nearly a year now, it's just so user friendly, have you checked the fx's in dj and peformence? there very good, the fade to grey is a personal fav of mine.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 30th May 2010 10:35 - 15 years ago

on monotonia by disco
It's not a bad start but you really need to build on this track, cos is sound like you just made a 32 bar loop and copy and pasted it for the whole track.
But like i said you have a good foundation to make somthing good here.
disco
disco replied Unknown
thanks. you're right. this was first track i made in ableton so i rushed it rather than finishing it. since then i started around 10 projects barely finishing any of them. hopefully i'll get some ideas in the future to finish them properly.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 30th May 2010 01:58 - 15 years ago

on HeavenScottishHell by DJHardBeatz
Dont mean to affend you but this made me lol for all the wrong reasons. Bag pipes are just wrong.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 29th May 2010 21:04 - 15 years ago

on Atmosphere by Andrey
Sound like this could be quite good, but you REALLY need to turn down all your lvls, it's way to distorted.
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 22nd May 2010 16:13 - 15 years ago

on Zangao (original mix) by RodrigoAssa
Nice track, you have some good sounds going on in here.
There are a few points in the track that seem a bit flat and repetitive , i think a few more (possibly moldic) samples would really pick this track up.
Keep up the good work.
RodrigoAssa
RodrigoAssa replied Unknown
daves thanks, I liked the comment ... hug
davesmith1983
davesmith1983 22nd May 2010 16:05 - 15 years ago

on Sexar Rguez Ft StephanieKay - Tonight by Sexar
Nice track, but i would loose the vocals, it sounds like it in the wrong key and it just seems out off place in genral. the rest of the track is great tho.
Sexar
Sexar replied Unknown
haja yeah I know I had a mistake.... anyway thnks for your comment! Im gonna try to do it better next time :D and sorry about my english xD Im very mexican! (Y)
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