"The sounds, that background + that kick pattern omg dude"
Some crazy synths in there, usually i'll make my own synths but for this i went out and messed around with some presents think thats why it ended up with a different feel than most of my other stuff.
I really wanna do another track like this soon but we will see :)
I'm late omg man! I just have to comment before I go to bed. This have so much feelings put into this man, like you pour your heart out on this one. It's like something wants to run away and experience the world. Not sure if this is how you feel, but listening to this makes me feel that way. It also makes me feel like embracing myself more, to not take on the negative things people tell me, and to be true to myself.
Not sure of if I made things weird here lol. I think its like the 14th time I'm listening to these acoustics, been having me thinking man. Nice story man, I go to sleep now. See you later dude!
That was...quite accurate. I've always wanted to experience the world and all it's beauty. I definitely have the same feeling when I relisten to this song! And no worries, there are no weird feelings here haha, I appreciate the kind comments!
Ahh man! The feels. Your skills man, on a different level. I see hard work went into this arrangement. Your knowledge of music theory must have taken you years. Skills man.
What up Greg, MACK MAN here. Thankyou for the possitive comment, and taking time to listen. I took a little time with this one. I tried to keep it simple but strong with the melody line, which is the most important element in a song, and yes theory is very important. It helps you to know and understand what you're doing. With out undertsanding chords and how they function will limmit your ability to write on certain levels. One of my secrets for creating is, I rarely listen to the radio. I don't care what sounds are in, or what beats are happening or what the latest accapela is,because once those concepts get a hold on your subconscious you become a coppycat writer. Try not listening to any radio music for a month and hear what happens to your creativity.You will only have your musical thoughts and skills to depend on. Thanks again.Will stop by. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
Aye bruh, greetings, welcome to looperman! I did say I was going to critique. This is not to come off as hate or mean. The kick, clap, and hit hats is rubbish. The drum pattern didn't really work with the track. Good lyrical writing, the vocals isn't that bad, but not satisfying either. I believe with a little more practice you two can make something beautiful together.
I never got a chance to really listen to this genre. This kind of is music is refreshing. Do you have any recommendations of music to listen too in this genre?
Well, I got inspired by teh Supperclub albums. Mixes you can find on Soundcloud. Otherwise Paul Oakenfield(as mentioned below) also makes this kind of music back in the day.
Aye whats good Maxomunz. 1st time really seeing you around here. Greetings. I do agree, mixing, and mastering this, will carry this a long way. Besides, this is a dope track, but your mixing is a bit sloppy. Hint, What do you want to hear more in the song, your rapping or the track. The snare is way too loud.
Aye I saw your email bro. I play it few times, and I like the vocals. At 1:14 should of been the intro, that was a sick build up. I'm afraid, from 1:14 to 2:24 only stood out to me. I didn't liked the rest.
i dunno man i like the intro as is, it needs alittle more low end synths but ill run with it as is for now.
For the chorus, yyeeaahh that prob needs work and im still working on it so well see how it turns out.
As for 1:14 to 2:24 glad you liked :D the buildup is cool but i guess i prefer to have a cooler mid section than a cool intro.
Having a cool intro hooks people in,
But having a cool mid section is for the people who decided to listen past the intro. Does that make sense? haha i have no idea.
Ayee.... trap trap trap trap trap! We need Asian rappers on the forums pham. Those 808's does it for me. The "hey," and RickRoss, "Huh" chant adds to the trap bro! Sick one ^-^
I'm proud of you man! Interesting story, and crazy goosebumps over here man. Ayeeee! That male vocalist at the ending. This track is sick man. I love this ^-^
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Maybe you should put the "feature this track" option on. So more people can listen.
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Some crazy synths in there, usually i'll make my own synths but for this i went out and messed around with some presents think thats why it ended up with a different feel than most of my other stuff.
I really wanna do another track like this soon but we will see :)
cheers for the comment greg :)
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Not sure of if I made things weird here lol. I think its like the 14th time I'm listening to these acoustics, been having me thinking man. Nice story man, I go to sleep now. See you later dude!
That was...quite accurate. I've always wanted to experience the world and all it's beauty. I definitely have the same feeling when I relisten to this song! And no worries, there are no weird feelings here haha, I appreciate the kind comments!
Brado
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i dunno man i like the intro as is, it needs alittle more low end synths but ill run with it as is for now.
For the chorus, yyeeaahh that prob needs work and im still working on it so well see how it turns out.
As for 1:14 to 2:24 glad you liked :D the buildup is cool but i guess i prefer to have a cooler mid section than a cool intro.
Having a cool intro hooks people in,
But having a cool mid section is for the people who decided to listen past the intro. Does that make sense? haha i have no idea.
Anyhoo cheers for the feedback as always buddy
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Really funny movie indeed.Im sure as well if Borat made music propably would sound like this.
Thank you for taking the time.
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