You did good with this track man. My advice, is to much instruments are taking the spotlight, let one instrument be the front man, the rest push them back a little more.
I don't know why, but the piano melodies makes me think about this woman i like. And i like the way when everything just comes in the chorus, its really interesting.
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Yeah, the bulk of my tracks are old school and retro. It stems from my many years of playing in the early days.
Cheers,
Scott
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