Greetings, Now this has some nice flow to it this track. I do like it. Not sure about the vocals & vocodex part though. But the melodie itself is a solid one. And i like it a lot. It has a nice vibe to it which i do dig. So yeah well done. Keep on creating. Have a good one, Verdi
Hi Verdi, thanks for listening, I'm really glad you like it. But I'd like to point out that I never used a vocoder or anything like that. It was all done without any such effects. There's just one part where I added a bit of flanger to the vocals, but that's all.
Cheers,
Micky
Greetings, Now i liked the vibe of this one. It has that raw industrial vibe to it which i like a lot. So this is more industrial than trance luckily. Because i prefer industrial over trance. The only comment i can make here is that it could be done properly mixed. Besides that the elements and the track itself are prety good. And i liked it a lot. And yes one for the favs. Well done indeed. Keep on creating. And have a good one, Verdi
Greetings, I do love sometimes spoken word pieces from time to time. But to be honest. It was because i was reading the lyrics sheet. Otherwise i wouldnt even understand a thing out of it to be honest. Also those 2 voices in it confused it even more and made it more unclear. But i know the intention is good here. But to me it sounded prety messy. I needed to listen really hard to make sense out of it. Still what i read in the lyric sheet did shed some light on this. But anyway, keep on creating. And have a good one though, Verdi
Hello Verdi
I think it is a bit messy too, with the two voices but honestly the intention is to read the lyrics. It is a poem and I am very satisfied when is read. I am not a narrator or a vocalist. To tell you the truth I've been working on another poem and I have used AI voices. The dilemma is if I should try to accompany the voice in Greek or not, just because I wrote the poem and the music. It is creative and I enjoy the fact that these poems reach an audience, it is not strictly in written form. I agree with you though that this one is a bit messy. I also do not know if the idea of just writing the poem in the lyrics section escorted by the music written upon it, would be an acceptable way of presentation.
I really hope the written form did the job (you see it is a translation and in such casrs there is always a distance from the native language).
Tutto O.K, come dicono gli amici Italiani !
Best wishes, Anthony
Greetings, Now this was a pleasant surprise to listen to. I love it a lot. And yeah it does remind of a song you would listen before stepping into a battlefield or something when moving around in a AMC or something. So very well done. It has that rawness in it as well yet that gentle flow as well. So yeah i liked it a lot and one for the favs for sure. Keep up the good work. Have a good one, Verdi
Hi Verdi, well, thank you very much. You're a straight shooter and I admire your music, so I very much like that you liked it. Yes, it's a pretty typical loose, garage band style for me. At least you can tell it's not AI. Cheers Chris
Greetings, Gotto love these low vibe acoustic pieces. I fully enjoyed it and it was very pleasant to the ears as most of your work does that i know. So yeah it was a very pleasant experience again once more. So well done friend. Keep on creating & have a good one, Verdi
Hello Verdiqo my friend, thank you for your words of course, I just appreciate the opportunity to contribute in a small way....I consider you guys as artist, Im a lover of music and do my best at improvising my way into the mix.....I thank all of you for making me want to so more.....you in particular are one of the keys to this car so your involvement is an important one....thanks again my brother
Greetings, Damn this one did knock on the door for sure. This is great. I dig it all the way. And like it a lot. It even has a lil bit that industrial undertone slightly under it that is. But i liked it. But one for the fav for sure. Excellent job on this one. Keep up the good work. Have a good one & keep on creating. Verdi
Greetings, Interesting story of what i have read in the description section part of all this. And yeah this song has those indie vibes and feel to it. The lyrics were prety interesting to listen to as well. A interesting story for sure. The track itself is prety well balanced out. When it comes to the element part of things. Did i like it well... let say i appreciate the work that has been put in here. Anyway keep up the good work. And have a good one, Verdi
Greetings, Now this was interesting to listen to. The vocals are prety interesting to in this one as well. The melodie itself is prety simple. But simple doesnt mean necessarily bad so keep this in mind. The track on itself is ok and balanced out enough. So well done. Have a good one, Verdi
Greetings Glenn, Nothing beats some good old fashioned jazz now is there. As always i was pleasantly surprised by this song and i liked it a lot. So yes very well done and i loved it all the way. All we need now is a good glass of whisky and a sigar keep vibing to it and everything would be complete hehe. So yeah excellent job my friend. And one for the favs of course. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Hey my friend its been too long, hope everything is good, I really appreciate you checking out this track, just more having some fun trying to play a guitar....never ends I guess. Looking forward to more of your work....peace my friend.
Greetings, now this was prety interesting to listen to. I did like it though. Its prety catchy. All the elements seems to be well placed as far as i can hear. Its maybe a bit loud but thats really it though. So yes a prety solid track indeed. Keep up the good stuff. Have a good one, Verdi
Greetings once more, I always keep an eye out for the people that visit me from time to time. So i thought lets take a look at this one as well. So we got a prety solid hip hop track here. Although hip hop isnt much my cup of tea but thats just a matter of taste. The track on itself is well balanced and good. It has the typical elements that you would find in a clasic hip hop song. The vocals & lyrics were solid as well. So although this isnt my kind of thing. Still i did liked what i heard in here. So well done here. Its solid its well balanced. And thats what in the end matters. So keep on creating & listening. Have a good one & One love, Verdi
Greetings, Although iam not a religeous man myself. Still this track was still prety pleasant to listen to and did get my attention. And iam always open to anything really. The track is solid. I do like the flow in this one. The vocals were pleasant to listen as well. I would mix it down a lil bit. But the track on its own is a solid one. So well done here. Keep on creating & listening. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Hi, Verdiqo.
Thank you so much for your honest and thoughtful feedback-it truly means a lot to me. Im glad the track caught your attention, even though youre not particularly religious.
I especially appreciate your comment on the mix-I'm always striving to improve, so your input is genuinely helpful. Thanks once again for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts
Greetings once more, Now in this track there were some things i liked and didnt like. As i was listening to the intro and build up, it really sounded promising from 1:11 it started to mess things up and lost attention and focus of the track. Than at around 1:50 it started nice again till around 2:57 it went down under. Also this wasnt mixed properly esspecialy within the pieces that the song did go under. It was loud noisy & messy. Iam just be honest here like i always am. So in this case i would recommend to keep the good pieces and create a track with those only. But hey thats just my opinion. Anyway keep on creating. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Feeling really honored to see your opinion, a quite different and valuable comment means more for me to refer! I have witnessed a huge side-effect from the musics I used to listen that they usually just cannot stop being in a radical loudness-war and focousing too musch on hi-freq contents. yeah maybe I should truely calm down and make it more naturally next time.
Cheers & love, Shaw.
Greetings, Now this was also one of the pleasant surprises i stumbled upon. I really love this one. So what can i say lets see. Track solid, elements very refreshing & diversive, Vocals top notch & the mixing part on point. Does it catches the summer? It certainly does ;) So yes this was very refreshing and nice to listen to. So well done indeed and i loved it. I dont say that much but this one did get me to say this. And of course one for the favs as well. So well done friend. Keep up the good work & keep on creating. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Greetings Kayos once more, While listening to this song i was once more pleasantly surprised. I love the vibes and elements in this one. So very well done and executed. The track itself is balanced. But there is a but here. If i were you i still would it mix properly because its a bit on the loud and raw side of things. But the track itself, the elements, instrumentations & vocals are very good and on point. So again very well done. Keep up the good work & keep on creating. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Hello Verdiqo, many thanks for your reply. I have to admit that this time i was using a digital mastering tool and put it to the limit. It is all about the right glue of a mix. I may use R2R to glue it again to get more of an analog touch of the 80s. At the end it is all about taste. Cheers, Oli
Greetings, This track did throw down some good old memories for me on memorie lane. The genre synthwave was also found around the 80s. And it does captures the synthwavy elements in this song very well. So i do like it. And this was certainly a joy to listen to. So well done indeed. So keep up the good work & keep on creating. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Hi Verdi, thanks for listening to the track and leaving some feedback, it's much appreciated and a good way to grow as a musician. I'm glad you liked the track, I'm pleased with it, but there's always room for improvement, which is why the comments section on LM is so important. Thanks.
Greetings, Now this was a nice track to listen to. A pleasant surprise to the ears indeed. The track itself is very well balanced. And its already prety good. What i would do is add some more elements and variations to it. Just a suggestion not a necessity though. Besides that a solid track indeed. And which i enjoyed listening to already. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Greetings, After listening to this. I did get more dubsteppie like vibes than EDM really. Did i like it? Well let say it was different. Iam not a dubsteppie fan myself really. And the track was rather loud. So it could use some fine tuning in there as well. Still although this isnt my cup of tea. The track is still solid only a bit to loud for my taste. Anyway have a good one & keep on creating. Verdi
Greetings, Oeh i love the buildup on this one. Listening even further its getting even better. I really do like what you have done with this track. It was very pleasant to listen to. I dig the vibes on this one. Its very well balanced. The elements you used in this one are prety good as well. So yeah all in all a solid track i like. So well done & keep up the good work. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
Greetings, Now this track was prety pleasant to listen to. It has a bit of a acoustic vibe to it as well. Which i like. The vocals are very nice to listen to. I like that guys voice. It has a pleasant ring to it ya know. And i dont know what you did with the drums. But here i thought it was played live. So very well done on that as well. All in all a solid track which i like. So well done friend. Keep up the good work. Keep on creating & have a good one, Verdi
I am glad you like it Verdi !! Nothing special about the drums. Midi work as usual....I was probably more patient with the shaping of the velocities and surely very lucky !! (Just an amateur....) . Thanks for listening and for your so kind comment !! Cheersssssssss !!!
Greetings, Oeh i like the flow of this track. Good rhythm and beat indeed. Prety catchy. Not so sure about the vocals though. But thats just a matter of personal taste. I do hear the drum & bass elements in this one prety well. But also some lightly dubsteppie vibes as well. Which gives it a nice twist on it as well. All in all a solid track indeed. And i liked it. So well done. Keep on creating & have a good one, Verdi
Greetings Verdiqo. The vocal inspired the composition, and is actually a tad popish for my taste. But I heard a spark of magic in it, and it was off to the races.
Greetings, Now this was a nice track to listen to. And ive seen in the comments this is a remix of something. Well iam no fan of remixes but iam a fan of originality. Still the melodie is solid and well balanced. The vocals are ok but could be improved more on. The mix itself is ok. So still besides these things i mentioned. I did like the track. So well done. Keep on creating. Have a good one, Verdi
Greetings, Now this was interesting to listen to. I do miss some more varietys though and it sounds a bit monotomous for my taste. Still i do like the elements you used in here though. They were prety good though. And it has the potential to become a good song if you choose to. The audio itself is clear enough though which is always good. So keep on creating. And have a good one, Verdi
Thanks for listening, I'm glad you found it interesting. I agree it's a bit monotonous, more as usual. I don't know if the potential will be explored, I'm a "creator" and have a lot of time, creating about 1 new track from scratch per week. Since this track I have the next one ready en 2 in development. I just share what I created for myself and happy when people like it and/or possibly collect ideas from it.
You like to remix this track? You can have the stems, just PM me via the profile page :)
Greetings, Now this was a quiet unusual piece to listen to. But in a way i do dig it though. It sure has some interesting elements in them which were a interesting choice for sure. The vocals were ok as well. And i read this is a demo so its gonna be improved is it not? If i understand correctly. The mixing is not so good to quiet and muffles your song away. So it needs some more volume and spirit so that we can hear the song more clearly and better. Besides that unique for sure. Still kinda catchy. So iam looking forward to the full finishing touches of this song. And i will listen to it again when its done. Keep up the good work. Have a good one, Verdi
Greetings, Now this was a surprise to listen to. I dig the flow of this track. Not sure about the heavy & distortion parts in these though. But the lightly parts are very suiting for this track. The vocals i like as well. All in all still a solid track i did enjoy it though for the most part. So well done. Keep up the good work. Have a good one & one love, Verdi
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Micky
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I think it is a bit messy too, with the two voices but honestly the intention is to read the lyrics. It is a poem and I am very satisfied when is read. I am not a narrator or a vocalist. To tell you the truth I've been working on another poem and I have used AI voices. The dilemma is if I should try to accompany the voice in Greek or not, just because I wrote the poem and the music. It is creative and I enjoy the fact that these poems reach an audience, it is not strictly in written form. I agree with you though that this one is a bit messy. I also do not know if the idea of just writing the poem in the lyrics section escorted by the music written upon it, would be an acceptable way of presentation.
I really hope the written form did the job (you see it is a translation and in such casrs there is always a distance from the native language).
Tutto O.K, come dicono gli amici Italiani !
Best wishes, Anthony
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Thank you so much for your honest and thoughtful feedback-it truly means a lot to me. Im glad the track caught your attention, even though youre not particularly religious.
I especially appreciate your comment on the mix-I'm always striving to improve, so your input is genuinely helpful. Thanks once again for taking the time to listen and share your thoughts
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Cheers & love, Shaw.
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Yes a boardmix. I appreciate fyour feedback. It's a newer style of composition for me as I typically make folk music or sparse indie.
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