bro i'll be watching out for it, i will repeat nothing wrong with loopers we are all part of the musical family :)) but you sing too bro you have an identity, your own, push that fact because your good, keep chopping and bringing us your creativity
BCV great comment, i got nothing against loop jockeys really bro, i started as one even though i play drums and keys, and i like Slimm we have good contact when he's around im listening to yours as i write :))
This slams, I think it would sounds great in a car. I think it is ready for a vocal too. Do you plan to add vocals later or try to sell the track to a rapper?
One of the main reasons I put some of my stuff out there in a place that anyone can access is my pursuit of vocalists. I want to find some Vocalists that might want to turn a Collab into a duo, or something along those lines. It's been very hard for me to find for some reason. I appreciate the praise man. And anything I post here, unless noted, is open for Vocals.
This is great "You need more nourishment, my rhymes serve punishment" "I'm Penning fresh lines with my papermate" legendary lines there
I'm a bic round stic med man... I already have to buy them from latin market. Last time I bought two boxes. I will probably stop writing songs if they discontinue that pen :)
thanks bro, i buy pens in bulk too, i would have a panic attack if i never had one, and they have to be black ink, fucking mad mental health, is it just me? who the fuck writes in blue. ive just wrote another bar fest been practising it to a Dre type beat like a slim delivery but im putting something together that i play pianos strings and drums so im still undecided at the min, keep ckecking bro
This has character and floats super nice as indie dream pop. I really like your voice. I think I said this before, but you have a very genuine vocal delivery that is easy to connect with.
Dimestop gets better every time I pop on LM for a listen. Your flow is so unique and easy on the ears and your lyrics go deep without being forced. Refined :)
cheers Slimm, i appreciate you reviewing my tracks, ive had some good work recently and got some good bars to come too, i seen you got fresh up i was hoping you would soon as i seen your mail i checked first :)) i'll be on it in a bit, thanks for the visit bro
cheers for the kind words Slimm, as you know i always try put a lot into the lyric and try to keep it witty, im working on a few tracks at the same time so hopefully keep the lines fresh and keep having fun, just listened to Mr Biggles again time to level up, i got that nip :))
This is really good atmospheric DnB. You can sell this in a library for video I think. It's says a lot and has strong imagery, but is not too busy and not cluttered or distracting. Good composition :)
Groovy guitar. i know you listen to Wes ;) I would put some treatments on drums to make them a little more humanized, because the whole track has a lot of vibe and the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. The loop works, but I think it can provide more support for the arrangement and set it all off with some tlc. Really great playing. Very enjoyable!
Thank you, V, for the listen and comment. I appreciate your opinion of this track. I need a more specific explanation of your critique. Hit me hard, I won't be mad at you. When you say you would put some treatment on drums to make more human, I'm assuming you mean additional processing. You go on to say the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. I actually wrote the drum pattern, So I guess you could call it my loop, and by the drums being the pulse of any track, make me understand what you mean when you say they struggle to keep up as a simple loop. Again I appreciate your opinion, so that I can understand how to fix what you are hearing on this one. PEACE. T576 OUT.
I like this. the progressions are super delux. I think you should hire a live bassist. the bassline is good, but it is a little stiff and artificial when soloed. A pocket player would tear it up and really push the song imo. The motifs are really strong, esp on horn and guitar. Nice work here :)
Hey VirginiaSlimm. Thank you for stopping by. Your comment's and perspective with the fave is greatly appreciated. I would love to plug a live bassist in to give a more organic feel to the groove. I feel you on "tear it up"! But for the time being, I will work on those stiff sections. Have a great weekend. Peace.
Very cool. I like this genre for your voice. vocals could be weightier in the mix imo. I hear your voice when but have trouble hearing what you are saying. You put work into your lyrics so i think it's important to hear what you are saying. :)
thanks for the stop off and feedback Slimm, i think your right on the vocal, the backing was a little low in places, i have brought it up slightly. its my north-east UK twang (accent) even the English struggle understanding it :)) we talk fast, thanks for checking me out again bro, really appreciate it
ai is getting closer and closer.It's still doesn't emote for me but the track and the arrangement are nice. I wonder how good the ai audio will be in 6 months. We are now using ai to create and talk to ai's. They are probably sampling us from their inside world and wondering if we sound like real robots :D
I believe that we have reached a point where it will become increasingly difficult to know what is natural and what is artificial. In the coming months and years, we will certainly be more and more surprised.
I'm listening, trying to decide if you have what it takes to be "the one" producer! ;) Hehe. Solid track and good mixing. You will have success with a vocalist for your materials I imagine!
Commented on Bossin by TheMilkyMan
This is so swanky. Great beat and production!
Commented on Your just a loop jockey by dimestop
I am loop riding today as a matter of fact :D...
Trying to get good at using my mpc so I'm loop chopping today
Commented on BCV Bitch Game feat Slimm remix by bringerofDOOM
This is wonderful :D
Commented on berlin by groebeats
This is crisp and ready for some vocals :)
-What is the translation of the hook into English?
I would like the stems if you have them posted up
Commented on Your just a loop jockey by dimestop
Loop jockey
Guilty as charged :D
Commented on The Box- Uncut Mix by Pnnywze
This slams, I think it would sounds great in a car. I think it is ready for a vocal too.
Do you plan to add vocals later or try to sell the track to a rapper?
Commented on Frightening Men by dimestop
This is great
"You need more nourishment, my rhymes serve punishment"
"I'm Penning fresh lines with my papermate"
legendary lines there
I'm a bic round stic med man... I already have to buy them from latin market. Last time I bought two boxes. I will probably stop writing songs if they discontinue that pen :)
Commented on i dont need to know by BONEZONMARZ
This has character and floats super nice as indie dream pop. I really like your voice. I think I said this before, but you have a very genuine vocal delivery that is easy to connect with.
Commented on See You Later by dimestop
Dimestop gets better every time I pop on LM for a listen. Your flow is so unique and easy on the ears and your lyrics go deep without being forced.
Refined :)
Commented on SuperSpreader Featuring Silver Bella by doofus
This really grooves and fits the vocal nicely. Chords at turnaround are well placed and. Very nice work. Love this drumming too.
Commented on Mon Coeur by deanp
Good mastering. It pumps as it should for this genre. It's impressive. Very nice work.
Commented on Drop Your Trousers by dimestop
I'm always impressed with your tracks. Earworms. The vocal edits and adlibs/backing are really on point. Sharp lyrics :)
Commented on BREATHE by weston63
This is really good atmospheric DnB. You can sell this in a library for video I think. It's says a lot and has strong imagery, but is not too busy and not cluttered or distracting. Good composition :)
Commented on AFTER PARTY by T576
Groovy guitar. i know you listen to Wes ;)
I would put some treatments on drums to make them a little more humanized, because the whole track has a lot of vibe and the drums struggle to keep up as a simple loop. The loop works, but I think it can provide more support for the arrangement and set it all off with some tlc.
Really great playing. Very enjoyable!
Commented on HandsUp by nubud
That's crazy bass. I enjoyed listening to this. Put a vocal on it :) It's is cool and commercially viable, ready to go!
Commented on Take It Home Mastered by kingmt77
I like this. the progressions are super delux.
I think you should hire a live bassist. the bassline is good, but it is a little stiff and artificial when soloed. A pocket player would tear it up and really push the song imo.
The motifs are really strong, esp on horn and guitar. Nice work here :)
Commented on claude debussy - clair de lune by doudei
Great job, one of my favorites.
Thanks for sharing!
Commented on make the champagne pop by dimestop
Very cool. I like this genre for your voice.
vocals could be weightier in the mix imo. I hear your voice when but have trouble hearing what you are saying. You put work into your lyrics so i think it's important to hear what you are saying. :)
Commented on Lost In The Gaze by Juliooliveira
ai is getting closer and closer.It's still doesn't emote for me but the track and the arrangement are nice. I wonder how good the ai audio will be in 6 months. We are now using ai to create and talk to ai's. They are probably sampling us from their inside world and wondering if we sound like real robots :D
Commented on BILBOZO - Who Am I by Bilbozo
that is really great hard rock. drums and guitars are right on point. :)
Commented on FULL AUTO TRIGGER by BLACKMANSTA10
I promise i'm not trolling...
How is this song NOT called "Beat 'em down"?!?!
:D...
Commented on Shimmer - Contest Demo by InitiumMusic
I'm listening, trying to decide if you have what it takes to be "the one" producer! ;)
Hehe.
Solid track and good mixing. You will have success with a vocalist for your materials I imagine!
Commented on North London Post-Punk Scene by Mr Axel by MrAxel
Keep this drummer close! Nice chops.
Really great energy and authentic playing. i think you should shop it for a vocalist and distribute it maybe.
Commented on My little Enemy by 2Sisters
This is a really calming friendly vibe. Chords on the guitar are super deluxe :)
Big respect for xylophone outro :D
Commented on BAR FOR BAR LINE FOR LINE by OPPSMOKAH
The ideas are solid. I wish there were drums. It's really only missing that imo. Big distorted 808s and trap snares would sound great on it.