Salkizar

Hey dude, this track struck up one thought.."Collab"

Wot u think. Would love to work with u and see wot we can come up with together!! Lemme know!!! By the way, great track!! Awsome kick and clap ....great melody, beautiful production too!!

Bravo!! Now this is a trance tune!! Still could be doin with a bassline but much more together than the other tune.."for now"!

Nice1

Hey man. First off very nice track. It has great sounds and the percs sound awsome. Synths are sweet too, and really good melodies sey the whole thing off to a tee!

Now the bad news....This track really needs a drivin bassline to move it along. I was listenin to it thinkin, "what is the matter here?" And when I listened to the mix i noticed NO bassline cookin the track...That is a key factor in trance man. You need a great bassline drivin the song along with the kick. I hear it soooo many times on looper and it really frustrates me. You are a great artiste and you should know better, but dont take this as a big criticism coz it aint...The rest of what u have done is fab! But concentrate on gettin that groove first...then worry about the synths and stuff!

You are gettin better with every track man, and I hope you don't take this the wrong way! Peace!

sooo good for such a short time!!! Awsome work man....wish i could work this fast!!!

very nice work all round! The vocal sounds superb, and the way you fitted the music around it really gives it a great clubby feel!!

LE made some good points...But nothin wrong with VEC samples tho...its all in the mix of the song. All you need on your claps and hats is a little reverb and take a little off the high freq on the eq!! In fact, I would find a different clap sample..dont think think the one you've used really fits the song..but hey, its just one tune....just move onto the next one...sometimes you just have to leave somethin behind and get the next one started!! Nice work man!

hey this is really good..I imagined it wit a great backing drums and hats etc and it gave me shivers...hope to hear an updated version of it soon...and thankyou very much for the comment about me too man.really appreciate it!

awsome tune man...very interesting...nice n different to the norm

very clubworthy dude, and nice n original!! Nice1 good mix too..

All i can say is WOW!!! what a collaboration!! Everything in this is fantastic!!! Little less stereo seperation on the sax tho.."My bad?"

Fantastic!

yeah recognize that harp loop from mixcraft, but the point is you have used the loops to maximum effect here man...so it shows you know how to arrange a great track!!! Well done ....this is fab!!!

i was luvvin this man...wish it was a full length track...

Bit short innit???

Unbeleivably great man...BUT where is that rap?? I was soooo lookin forward to hearin you on this track...but it didn't happen...get your vox on it!!! It's fantastic now but would be amazing with a vocal..!!

Well you don't resemble your username...Def NOT lazy....Man u r really gettin the hang of this stuff!! Well done for a job well done! Very impressed...crackin melodies..and i felt a shiver run through me on the break which means your headin in the right direction...so keep at it....keep workin on your production too..you definitely have the music in you, just bang on with gettin it to sound great!! Keep up the good work dude!

Yeah crack on and get it finished dude!! Its soundin good so far...

very well produced my man!!! vox sound great!!! everything nice n crisp n clear!! Great track dude..

really sounds that you spent a looooong time on this one!!! Congrats dude!! Sounds like your hard work paid off in the end! Love the synth sound you used and that perc work is wicked!! Keep em comin..(dont take a year on every track tho...cant wait that long!) LOL!! Nice1

oh yeah....love that kikk!!! wasn't sure bout that melody at first but it built beautifully!! Very nice synths too....noddin ma head now...nice1.....kikk back in now...bangin..love it!!

wheres the kikk drum?? I can hear a slappy thing but it aint bangin...get that compression on it..give it some boot!!!

good percussion mix on this man...keep at it and remember get that kick bustin yo eardrums before you add the rest!!! Tappin ma foot right now...

I am likin your stuff dude...keep it up....!!

very clever arrangement dude,,,! nice melodies too..mix well with the bassline you have goin on...just want that kikk bangin a little harder! Nice1!

nice track man..just needs more oompf with the kik and other percussion...get some better kik and drum sampples on it and it will cook!!

man this is bangin..!!! Love the kick here...really got my head boppin and me foot tappin....just needs some work on the mix, but fekkin great track!!!