Salkizar

Hey man! The melodies u have in here are top notch...really get that emotion u mentioned. The kick is lost in the mix tho so bring it up in the mix. That will make a major difference to this track. And will give it the energy it needs.....Gr8 work my friend!

Pretty good stuff mate. Like the melodies in there. I think at the moment all its missing is an energetic bassline. You have good melody like i said although to lift it up the bassline has to be driving it along. A good tune to check out wot i mean would be an Airbase song called sinister. Its on youtube! See ya! And keep at it man.You'll only get better and better with each track!

some terrific ideas goin on in here man! You can tell u have a lot sloshin around in ur head and are tryin to get it down!!! It will come mate!! Just keep at it!! Great work..

Oh yeah man! Gr8 tune! Lovin those soft synths...did u make this in ableton? Sounds like it...or was it fl? Anyway...i really love the simplicity of this track mate! Great sound throughout.

Nice melodies too...A vocal would sit really well on this track u know and take it to the next level..maybe let Gizella have a listen...I reckon she'd love to put a vocal to this one! Keep it up man! I'll be watching for more of u!

dj ata!! As always great stuff from u! You never let me down when i listen to ur music it always impresses me..Great sound, great mix and use of synths too! Fab track. Dont think it is missing anything at all...defo complete song! Well done man! Gr8 track....keep this up and keep em coming!

fekkin love is tune i do aye!!! Bangin!! And the vox parts u have added which normally sound cheesy in some tunes actually really comliment this track!! Great stuff mate!!!

really happy sound to this track,. Guess thats why u were smiling man!! Good work and keep it up....watch those notes in the melody line tho....one or 2 may be slightly off key with the rest....

really enjoy that deep bass with the kick thudding away!! Really chewy feeling to that bass n kik ....Nice synth work and melodies too man!! Really nice work and it shows u have spent a good while on this one!!

you are the master of melodies mate...that piano is stunning.so original!

I really like the break too man..great chord prog...

Nice change after the break too...lovely sounds!

Maybe bring that piano back in near the end mate...coz it was really good..think it would tie the whole song together and combined with your synths after the break i think it would be stunning!

As always great work...

90 whole minutes....man..thats sick!!! Wish i could do sh@!t this good in 90 minutes!! I spend days sometimes weeks on a tune!! Awsome!

love the way u bring in the melody line....really good version of this classic song. get a pumpin bassline in there to drive it along and give some trance energy man! Could be great!!! Keep at this one wanna hear the final version!

this is shithot mate!! only thing wrong is the vocals arent the best quality, but with some quality mixing and vocal this track would be awsome!!! Keep up this style man!! Great stuff!

Hey dude! THis is a really great track. Has everything that a classic trancer should have. Great mixing to and use of panning effects etc. This reminds of tiesto actually. Very original sound mate! Terrific tune!

Great trancer matey!! Nice breakdown and build! I love nexus. You know a lot of people have said its cheesy....I think thats coz either they dont have it, or have never used it. And although it is simple to use there is quite a lot more to it than people think! Gr8 work as always on this one man! I always look out for your tracks!

Really great stuff man! Lovin thlodies in this one. I would call it sunrise though personally..sunset is when the party starts, ends at sunrise....But i think i do know where u were comin from with the title! Gr8 work!

Nice track mate!!! Great sound on the whole thing!

For me I'm feeling that the mix is too closed in...know wot i mean. It feels like the whole track is being played in a small box. I think that may be why you feel the vox are too thick. What I would do is I would take the vox out of the mix first. Then concentrate on getting a bigger sound on the instruments. So drums, bass, pianos etc...till they have more space in there. Then I would re introduce the vox, and play with a little thinning out on the eq side first. Then a touch of reverb, just a touch tho. Then drop the volume of the vox and bring it up ever so slowly in the mix until you feel its right. Burn a cd, play it in the car....go back, adjust the mix, burn a cd, etc..Of course you'll have a guide track you use..i would say maybe a James Morrison track should give u a good idea of how it COULD sound ...Best of luck mate. It's a great song and with the right mix it'll be brilliant! Hope that helps a wee bit!!

lovin that slappy yet punchy kick in here and the soft chewy bass is stunning! Great track!!!

yeah this is bangin stuff! Kinda happy trance...I find trance can be difficult but it depends on how the tune goes....sometimes it falls into place and other times it does yer nut in! But this is quality mate! Awsome!

Awsome sound man!! Great stuff!

Hey this is the first techno track i have listened to in a while....that beat at around 1:05 is da bomb!!! Awsome man! That would make a dancefloor bounce, and when it speeds up...Wow!!!! What a tune dude!!!! Keep em like this an i'll be ur greatest fan!!! Thsi is quality!!!!

likin the tune man! Guitar is great...mix is great.....fab tune!!! Not much more to say really!

Finish it....No wonder you r called lazyboy!!! LOL!!! No ...but really, this has a great feel to it...but it needs to get FINISHED!!!! Crack on mate!

really like some of the changes you have in here! Lookin forward to hearin more of your stuff!

nice melodies man!!! Thaz wat a trance track iz all about!!!! Good melodies!! Keep it up.....Great kick sound and mix on this too!!