Realy good track mate, I wrote you this long review about how much I enjoyed listening to this track, the reverbed beat, the presence of the subtle melody in the back ground and the perfect vox on it. Nice one!The server bombed me and all was lost so here is my shortened version.
Nice bass stabs going there mate...thats one mean ass kick you got going there mate. Slowed down the Gizz vox, nice work there...eerie flow to it and defo feelin it. Nice variarion on the second part. Nice choppage mate I can hear the cymbal ride shortened in there and the reverb on the snare layered with fx. Nice one!
The guitar samples were used to it's full potential here...does get repetitive though....changing to the Rhodes sample...mmm nice vibe. What a break mate pretty neat stuff.
Yo bro your track have mastering issues...what program you using???It's muffled and not crisp ,lacks top end mate. The tune could work if and when you sort out the kinks. Noice one
You should really look into the ,mastering....if and when I increase volume there's a distinct hiss sound....not good for the track...will comment after your new upload.
Funny enough....the arrangement is well off beat and nothing close to what any artist do today...I do feel this but I don't know where to class this. That sample ,tik tok, sounds kinda cool in there. The hats are to sharp IMO this might work with the right vocal on it,as in a bridge somewhere????
Listening now......drums are tight...synth comming in. Bass layered....The bass is full and the synth fits good to, but check into your drums it sounds a bit weak....The bass is over powering the beat. Nice break you got going there mate. The bass should be brought down a tad bit. Overall production pretty good. Try to add more one shots in the track to make it sound interresting it does not need much though here and there a delayed reverb vocal or blip or bleep. Noice one!!!
It's a cool track but very generic mate, I hear this type of vibe at every club, productions good as per usual and beats are tight and snappy! Do you have compression on your low end???Sub sits nice in the mix and a good dance filler for the commercial crowd.
Dude excellent use of samples ,my friend just love it!!!!Wow proper bro, the sample you can just drop the volume on that a bit over powers the vocal. LOtsa movement in the beats and pumping beats mate you deserve a standing ovation for this. Looking forward to hear more stuff off you mate. Think about this....maybe RAP on drum and bass beats??Tech step?
Your tune is to loud Ameli, you should tone your mixer levels down a tad, the sound is distorting. The arrangement is kind cinematic and the feel is good. Sort the mastering bit's out and mixing repost, give me a holla and I'll check it again.
I listened and yes your still in the fresh stages....where's the bass mate????Just kicks and snares..Try adding a bass line and hi -hats, mix it up with cymbal rides and so forth, always A/B your tracks to other artists. You hava catchy lead though.keep at it and you will get better mate.
listening...4x4 beat, yeah defo house,feeling the guitar mate,sounds like laid back house of gold fish....what movie clip is that vocal from???Sounds soooooooooo familiar.
really like this....nice subtle intro. What do you use to make your pad sounds???Hava Nice feel to it nice vocal proper for this track giving me a laid back sound. The stutter type loop works well and the froggy throat layered in the back ground. Like you style mate update me when you upload new stuff .
Thats a deep sub mate....panned snare????Ok haven't seen that work, shouldn't it be dead center?Anyway I know there's no fixed rule but yeah ok. Like all the Little fx though and the reaga feel to it.
Wow nice tune mate, the guitar suits it and fits the entire track, your music reminds me of budha bar music, I can hear the same vst plugin effect on the guitar again, gives it that distant feel,with a touch of reverb and delay onto it. IMO make the bass less pronounced, I feel the arrangement is so good you do not need to attract attention with loud power bass. Your eq sounds good to I cant barely hear any frequencies clashing mate. Proper job and well done,another favorite for me.
Love it mate love it!!!!You got the essence of the sea in this with the ongoing pad in it's state. Nice drums proper and snappy, what DAW you using mate???? really like the bass sitting nice in the mix. The break works for me, panning those pads does work wonders and nice effect VST on the nylon string guitar mate, feeling it big time, checking out your other tunes to,...favorited...noice!!!
Beats are crisp love the snare and variation of your bass, nice and snappy!!!! Did you use a compressor on the bass??? The intro does not fit IMO and the tracks to short mate....I want more. This samples or did you play any instruments here?
I think that distorted vocal was intended blue transit. She was trying to use it as an FX vocal, but applied it wrong. You should use a vst plug in, like a vintage warmer and add it to the track your recording your vocals on. Try to eq out all the bad frequencies to,somewhere between 300 to 800hz. Keep at it and read up on mastering techniques or just pm slap he is good and can help you. Also go to computer music website loadsa free stuff
Production wise your music is the best in here mate, sounds proper quality mastering . The horns might seem a bit to loud at there peaks???Maybe volume automate them and bring it down a bit as to compressing it and making the sound seem unnatural? Love the congas coming in at 1:41 gives a real feel to the track, funny no one mentioned it. Just those horns , sounds great ,layered to perfection , but at some peaks its difficult to hear the vocalist. I might be wrong though, using Sennheiser HD 202, any good MR SLAP????
Hi Shamus, thanks for the advice about the horns. I will look at it and do a remix.I Hope your well and give me a shout if you upload some new tracks,cheers Slap...
very spacey and ambient like dnb, pretty sure you intended the feel of the track. Just need to sort out the mastering there its a bit soft. What programs are you using?
Did you play the piano??? Pads intro cool, the violin pad in the back ground compliments the whole vibe with that background flute,or ghost flute.
Not my style of music but the production sounds good.
I know it's rough, but this is one I prefer to just leave be. I made this in 2000, I think and had just found the loops online somewhere (it's all Martin Luther King Jr, not Malcolm X, by the way).
But, many thanks for the reply. I always enjoy the critical comments..
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