koga100

Sounds like Roman legions charging over the hills. Love the howling synth @ 1.17. This definitely brings the drama. Great job.

Really like that section at the 40 second mark! It sounds mysterious, which is my favorite type of music.

Fight! Lol it does sound like a Mortal Kombat soundtrack. Nice work very suspenseful especially the break part the psycho type sound. Great riser wind effect

Mortal Kombat!

Dope!

More variation is always more better. But for the purpose you describe, maybe reconsider the bits from roughly 1:00-1:16 and the scream after that. Both I think as a player would be off-putting. The string stabs I wouldn't do for more than 1 bar, and the scream maybe you could do shorter and more in the background (it might be much more effective at say -20 dB).
Mostly you've done an amazing job though and as a game maker I would love to use this. It's also amazing what you've done with free resources.
Great job!

very nice!

I was waiting for the "thing" that made me go "wow".
But it didn't really come.
It's big, it gets us in, but you need something to keep us there.
Sorry I can't help with what that is.
But it sounds good so far.
Keep going, it will come! :-)

Very dramatic, I can picture playing a thriller video game to this.

pretty epic to me!

glad to hear ..mate....

good cinamatic track.tho the toms are very massive...thy may be distorted a bit much

If you are going for electronic style cinematic, then I think you probably have done so to some extent. I'm personally not convinced though whether the electronic matches the theme of the title.

Regarding the melody, I assume you're trying to create something powerful and energetic, slightly uncomfortable, something that gets you on the edge of your seat for the next scene, or maybe the next track. If that's what you were trying to do, then it's a good effort, and I'd be interested to hear the next track :)

smokinnnnn.....enjoying the high...cheers

I never know what to advise people on their beats because I rarely know what they're trying to get it to sound like. This beat is a kinda quirky electronic beat with an old school feel to it. If that's what you were aiming for, you hit a bullseye.

This is so freakin cool especially intro. Love doing the same and hearing it from others. The sampling voxs. Great sound choices

Thank you i love this song

I like the synths, Its the drums and percussion I might add too to make a little more groove to the tune. Otherwise nice work.
Cru

Hello koga100,
Wow... I am literally in the process of posting a track with "spoken word" in it. Lately everyone seems to be posting "singing" so I thought spoken word for a change, and it seems you beat me to it. Bravo!
My feedback on this track would be that it needs a "bottom". The Synth work and the Drum needs to have more bass. In fact I think a Bass guitar line playing against a Drum and your Synth would "activate" the drive this track needs to sound powerful.
BTW... Keep in mind the last Electronic music I listened to was "Devo" and "Gary Newman" LOL...
Great track...
PEACE...

Awesome !!

so many things going on at once.....

Nice work on the track, I feel like it's taking me thru a story..

Sounds rather epic. "Space Machine" is a fitting title. Kudos

Love it.

i can tell a lot of time went into this one. the sounds and progression is excellent and I really enjoy this but i do have one minor complaint, the snare at the beginning is kinda loud enough to distract me from all the other stuff and i really want to hear all the other stuff. later on it isnt as much of a problem because theres more volume overall. this said, im stuck on really crappy headphones at the moment so maybe its just that.