This is pretty cool! Will you put some drums etc on it? I could also mix and master it a little bit. And do the screams, when you tell me where they should be! Pretty electronic tough, but its cool!
I put in some screams with my boy Infinex... And some makeshift drums, but those were just for scratch track, Still waiting for someone to do the drums and add the guitars..
new version here http://soundcloud.com/aiden-arrows/wishes-unfinished
Nice songs. I agree with the comment from ImpendingDoom about the lyrics.
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico
yea.. agreed on the drums.. but I had to make do with what I have, and I only have one microphone to mic all of Johns drum kit lol.. so it was what it was. And yup.. that's Jeremy for you. He never plays anything in the right key's when he solo's. That's pretty much why I'm starting my band over from scratch. He just likes to try and show off and play his guitar behind his head and pick up "girls" instead of practicing or learning the right licks
on Wishes by AidenArrows
new version here
http://soundcloud.com/aiden-arrows/wishes-unfinished
on Hannah is a HoHoHo Drunk for Christmas by AidenArrows
Regarding the music part... I think the drums could be a bit more "definite" (I am not sure if you want to make them more "punchy" or more "subtle" but currently they are a bit too in-between, IMHO).
And I am not 100% sure about the ending solo, maybe you could try to use some of the good loops you can find 'round here ;-)
But again, nice song.
Domenico
on Hannah is a HoHoHo Drunk for Christmas by AidenArrows