MightyMemphis

I it sounds pretty good. But I feel like the strings could be mixed just a little better. Theres a lot of things crammed in the middle at certain parts of the song. Panning or a stereo delay would solve this issue. Great work though.

Hi,
Try to mix the track a bit more. Some instruments are a distorted.
Eq your instruments
I like the melody but the mix can be improved

that backing e piano bit gives this one a nice smooth vibe (and a little R&B kind of sprinkle)...it wouldn`t be out of place on the pop charts as its nicely paced and you obviously spend more than a little time on the composition/arrangement..maintains the pace & key prog but has enough of those little breaks & transitions to keep the ears tuned in...noticed you limited fairly hard but the production sounds good...well done Memphis....I think you`ve got a good one going on here....Ed

I really like the vibe of this track! I also feel like you did a good job in keeping me interested for the entire song. Nice work and I can't wait to hear the final result!

I just love it man

everything was great

keep on

Samer

cool!

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Hey Memphis

A very emotion filled track, one of those tracks that makes you think about things, sometime things you have hidden away because they hurt to much, listening to this made me remember my late father, liking most about this piece, only thing that sounds maybe little overpowering is the hihat, don't mind it in the track, just seems maybe a tad high, oh another thing especially with the vocal, reminds me of MOBY one of my all time fav artist, overall a very good piece of work...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...

to bad because the acoustic guitar sounds like a bad virtual one !
anyway the song is nice !

bro please let me work on this piece. i think my flavor mixed with yours, would make a good combo. please consider. check out my previous tracks n hopefully you will accept. otherwise this piece is awesome n i love it!!

This is a nice eye opener! The song is composed really well, nice breaks and lots to keep me interested. Liked the way you ended to with the beat coming back in. Soothing, uplifting, peaceful and calming, nice one!

Wayne

Really nice chill out track, hope you find some good vocals for it but if not, it's pretty fine without!

Ahh... an acoustic track - I like it a lot!
NIce flutes and all background sounds.
Very chill and relaxing kind of music not only a backing track.
Good work!
A.

Hey man

Mate this has so many elements that I love in music, guitar, choir pad, flute, very nice beat for this type of tune, totally relaxing vibe, so loving it man, be interesting to see what it sounds like with vocals, personally at this stage I love it just the way it is...MASSIVE FAV...Peace n Respect matey...Mosaic...

nice melody really smooth me likey want to use

Like others have already mentioned, this track is very relaxing for the mind and body. I liked all of your sound, structure and effect choices as well. Good work and keep them coming!

This is good.

I like the melody and tone of the fake chiming guitars at the start but their timing makes them sound quite synthetic. If you could quantise them a bit to give them a looser feel, I think that might help a lot.

That lack of groove from the fake guitars continues throughout the track and they are the main backbone of the track. I still like them but know they could be better.

0:32 when the reverbed shaker comes in drives things forward nicely. It just is a good, solid groove and at my kind of tempo.

0:43 those synth aahs are cool.

1:22 little break is goodd before the flute enters, which I also like.

Ah, lots of stops in this one. It's kind of what youre doing instead of drum fills.

Overall, this has a bright, uplifting and positive fairly deep sort of sound.

I think you've left enough space for vocals. Another way of looking at it is that there could be a bit more going on musically after about 2:08 to keep things interesting (if it stays as an instrumental).

But, if you have vocals, you won't need to do anymore as the music will be quite busy enough once those vocals are in place.

Beautiful, warm and relaxing. Takes me back to the carefree days when you did not have to pay any bills.
Loved it when the 'ahhs' kick in at 0.43. You've given room for both horns and flutes to breath on their own. Anything with flutes and I'm in. :)
Well done MM. Faved! - B

i love it

Great Melody :D

my type of music. .... chilled and nice groove.

Sounds great. Very chill. This just needs the right vocals to bring it home. Luv to hear this finished with vocals. I'm a big fan of female vocals. This track is crying out for them. Whatever vocals you choose will be fine I'm sure, but I am very biased towards female vocals :)

Good luck
RW

i get ya man sorry i dont know how to reply to one person.

but ya well i was maybe hoping to get the beat and see what i can do with it, it gets me to a happy place which is sick! not many tracks get me there man.

if possible if i could get it from you, maybe i can throw some verses in it, and send you the done deal. i know from the last comment you made to the other guy, just hoping to give a different perspective.

-Ex

hey man very nice track! very soft and chill.

What kind of lyrics were you looking to put on it? rap or singing?

Nicely done MM, real calming and relaxing. Great vibes to this one. It's so elegant. peace

Gramo/Neo