Evisma

Evisma

Better Than You Since 82
Middle America, United States
Joined : 1st Apr 2013 - 13 years ago
Last Online : 4th Apr 2025 - 1 year ago
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mrwolf14
mrwolf14 22nd Jan 2015 14:04 - 11 years ago

on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
Hi MrEvan,
Good track (as usual).
I really like the bass work in the initial part: it has some "melodic" properties, which one would not expect from such a driving bass line. Good!
The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good.
marimba... now this is original, but it works very well.
I am not so fond of some synth sounds (e.g. 2:20) but this is a matter of taste.
The final bass riff is really "powerful" ... I love when the drums go away and the bass gains the "front position" (2:26)
Drumkit sounds a bit "fake": using a stereo spread plugin may help (as per MrNomad suggestion...after he pointed this out I started using it more on my tracks and in some cases it really improves things, but your mileage may vary here...)
Again: GREAT TRACK!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I would have downloaded it if download was allowed.
Evisma
Evisma replied 23rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Mr. Domenico! How are you?

"The tempo changes are "spectacular": this is one of the most difficult things to "plan on a DAW" and in this case they sound so natural. Very Good."

Thank you. Like I mentioned to Mr. Nomad, I just let the part I had play out and when it went to silence, I played some palm-muted guitar hits and got the tempo(down 20bpm), cut and changed the Tempo Track, and was able to turn on the click and play from the verse into the chorus very naturally. Getting the tempo let me set the tempo track and then the click followed it. Kinda hard to explain the process because I wasn't really paying much attention at the time.

I will address the drums soon. Thank you again for your feedback and honesty. It is the most important aspect of this site for me. I appreciate you.

Take care

Evan
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 22nd Jan 2015 10:03 - 11 years ago

on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
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BradoSanz
BradoSanz 22nd Jan 2015 06:21 - 11 years ago

on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
I say "it doesn't fit the same way a stereo drum track would" because a stereo drum track really fills the space up, livens it up a bit, ya know? A mono recording just comes across a little less exciting than a stereo track, at least in my opinion, but the song is still an excellent listen. Great job on this one, looking forward to some more!
Evisma
Evisma replied 23rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you kindly! I have multiple lines going and I never panned them. Thanks again.
BradoSanz
BradoSanz 22nd Jan 2015 06:19 - 11 years ago

on Scalpel Chowder by Evisma
I think the reason the snare may irk you is that its a mono recording. I find that I have the same issue with my drums - if it's a mono recording, it just doesn't fit the same way a stereo drum track would in my opinion. But it still does the job, even if you may not be entirely happy with it :)
Evisma
Evisma replied 23rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks! I'll go back in and mess with it soon. I appreciate the feedback!

Evan
topvega
topvega 17th Jan 2015 20:04 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
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topvega
topvega 17th Jan 2015 20:03 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
Sounds tight to me....really dig the "outro" part at the end.
Nice job all around, mix sounds great as well.

tv
Evisma
Evisma replied 21st Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you very much! I've been meaning to go back and listen to more of your tracks since I got a guitar and have never filled the role or rhythm player.

Thanks again.

Evan
Darkreine
Darkreine 15th Jan 2015 09:24 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
Every track I hear of yours is better than the last. Krrp that going, great track here!

Kenny
Evisma
Evisma replied 21st Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
That comment is a hard one to live up to, going into the future. I appreciate that very much.

I hope all is well with you.

Evan
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 14th Jan 2015 09:21 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
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3rdNippleMusic
3rdNippleMusic 12th Jan 2015 00:12 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
nice work my friend, very forward moving :)
promenade2239
promenade2239 11th Jan 2015 22:39 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
hi. somehow I can dissociate myself now from all what I've heard from your earlier works and I must say this is some very powerful song. A bit straightforward at first and simply totally different from what I do of course but I loved these metallic scratchy sounds and some heavier playing than usual. It brings a nice variety to the structure. I coudn't play properly your track to the end this time for some reason but I really enjoyed the first part. I will try again later. Best to you, Alex
ValveDriver
ValveDriver 11th Jan 2015 07:57 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
Evan. What's goin' on, man?

This one actually sounds like APC and Tool on stage together. You need to add some digital-electro elements to get some Puscifer in there now. Maybe get Milla Jovovich to do a cameo or two. Then, the triad will be complete, and world dominance shall begin! Or, at least...dominance on this cup of coffee shall begin, anyhow.

I like your idea of bringing the bass back to the front. Maybe you could do something where you have a super low end crunchy, heavy-##### bass chugging up the back ground rhythm, with your trademark polished bass running whimsical melodies, and a basic guitar weaving in and out of the two, keeping them pleasantly tied together, and filling in the gaps.

Just a thought.

Laters, mang.
Aaron
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 10th Jan 2015 23:01 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
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theHumps
theHumps 10th Jan 2015 13:48 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
You old softy. Trying to pluck people's heartstrings, aren't you?

My opinion is that keeping things fresh, new and different is the key to making music and growing as an artist. This track would be a perfect track in a set or album list that gives the listener a break from your usually more rambunctious style and then sets up a return to a more rockin' track. It can't always be at 10, can it?

Thought the drums could have had a bit more punch, maybe some more variety as well. I am very guilty of using only one drum loop through a song so it's like I'm throwing stones in a glass house. It's cool to keep things simple though and let other things shine.

I wouldn't say this is the best work I've heard from you but I like that it is different from your other work and incorporates some of your particular sound you have. Keep experimenting and trying new things and start wailing on that ax!!

Wayne
Evisma
Evisma replied 10th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words.

Gotta do something different every now and then. I did not sit down and intend to do a track like this. I got the first bassline down and then everything else just happened. Seemed like it was supposed to go as it did. But like I said, sounds like something that gets played at a school dance.

The ax will be wailed upon soon! Next one will be heavy.

Thanks Wayne.

Evan
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 10th Jan 2015 10:26 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
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Danke
Danke 9th Jan 2015 20:35 - 11 years ago

on Hangin Round Aceldama by Evisma
Hi Evan!

Beautiful melodies from both guitars...
Of course bass is the dominated but sooner or later there will be a definitive rhythm play...:-)

Good description...

Shake hands, Danke
Evisma
Evisma replied 9th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thank you for the kind words. Yes, someday I will get decent at rhythm guitar and add some. You seem to be very good at it. I'm all melody!

Doubt too many will get the title, or care to look it up. Meant to portray the loneliness Judas had to feel after giving up Jesus at his request,... though that bit of the story is not widely accepted.

Thanks for stopping by!

Evan
KissableBeats
KissableBeats 9th Jan 2015 18:59 - 11 years ago

on Twisticles by Evisma
thats rockin man
Evisma
Evisma replied 10th Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
That man's rockin
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 8th Jan 2015 00:37 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
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StaticNomad
StaticNomad 7th Jan 2015 01:15 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
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StaticNomad
StaticNomad 5th Jan 2015 08:50 - 11 years ago

on Vespertide by Evisma
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crucethus
crucethus 3rd Jan 2015 20:42 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
Congrats on the new Guitar. I like this piece when 1:22 kicks in as the moving bass-line is phenomenal. I like the percussion choices on this, agree slightly with static about the tone of the drums and percussion. I would also mix the guitar slightly (like a hair) further back in the mix, the excitement of getting a new toy always makes us mix it to forward cos we want to hear it. This is such a solid tune though I'm glad I listened and I'm glad U made it. Now I want to to hear a kick ##### solo over these beautiful arpeggios you have created.
Oh and thanks for the nice words on the forum about your favourite artists on looperman. I'm glad my charming personality brings something to the table here. ;-
Cru
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 2nd Jan 2015 06:38 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
Evan, I think most of the areas of critique have been covered (personally I think this is really solid work and there isn't that much to critique). Your bass playing is your strong suit, but I think you have a future as a six string gun slinger, haha.

I've had my eye on a PRS Custom 24 for a while, but I just can't justify the big bucks they are asking for it. So maybe I'll hit the lottery at some point and not feel bad about dropping $3,000.

I have a little secret to share with you concerning guitar chords. Instead of using standard tuning - E, A, D, G, B, E...try using drop D tuning (just tune the low E string to D) and then just bar the E, A, and D strings for your chords. Open would be a D chord (works as a major or minor chord), first fret is an Eflat chord, 2nd fret is an E, 3rd fret is an F and so on. You can pound some pretty intense rhythm work just using those 3 strings in drop D tuning. Maybe give it a try and see what you think.

Anyway, stellar work as usual. I really enjoyed it. Here's to a great 2015. Hope all is well.

Bear
Evisma
Evisma replied 3rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the kind words on the track. It is appreciated.

The PRS I got is an SE Custom 24, (tobacco sunburst), and sells for around $800. I got mine from Sweetwater on Black Friday for $400! Not a lot different from the USA made ones besides the tuners and pick-ups, which are easily upgradable, and I think the body thickness. Still, it is smooth and buzz-less, goes from single-coil to humbuckers, just really, really happy. I guess the PRS' are supposed to be the cross between a Strat and a Les Paul? They are scale-wise.

Thank you for the input on rhythm playing. I know drop D very well. Everything I do is in drop C#. Drop D with everything(including low D) down a half step. I think everything I have on this site is in that tuning.

I shall take your advice and put it to good use. Thank you for the help and taking the time to write something.

Take care.

Evan
domr30
domr30 30th Dec 2014 05:43 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
tres belle realisation agreable a ecouter domr
Evisma
Evisma replied 3rd Jan 2015 - 11 years ago
Why thank you!
Neomorpheus
Neomorpheus 24th Dec 2014 03:03 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
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ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 23rd Dec 2014 22:30 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
:)
Hi Evan , Mister .
i hope your missunderestanding has been solved about me and us and B and i hope this message won't annoy you .
i listened and enjoyed this track .
you're an amazing bass player !
warm regards to you and your beloved one .
Elena
Evisma
Evisma replied 28th Dec 2014 - 11 years ago
No misunderstanding.

Leave me alone.
theHumps
theHumps 23rd Dec 2014 18:48 - 11 years ago

on Stiff-Arming Stars by Evisma
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