marquecour

Great! Always a treat to hear an acoustic number here. Plus I dislike Facebook lol. Made me smile. Cheers Zoot.

sick work

that was super did you play both sections? I personally would of liked to hear some effects on the melody ie. reverb, delay and chorus. Are them sections available separate. Without adding drums just thickening out the melody would fill this out nice

yooo can i make a song with this pretty please. im probably going to anyway

I was trying to hear if this is played live? (yay) or whether any midi/plugins were involved? The chords sound very real, the single note melody for some reason less so.
Anyway, good job, and I was also thinking about how you posted this a couple weeks before the entire world needed a "get well soon" message very urgently.

Wow, I like this one.

Very nicely made , well done

I think others have said this needs more on it. It sounds to me like it is crying out for a vocal and also drums to kick in at some point. Good starting point though for what has the potential to be a great track. Nice work

im loving this. i live near the sea i can hear the lyrics washing over me.

The idea is solid and I agree with Terry, needs a few things like Eddied Vedder vocals, snappy drums and a deep bass. That's all, lol. Great bones to a song!

Wayne

Sweet tune my friend, nice work on the frets. Would be interesting to hear it wth vox. Thank you for sharing.

Cara De Sol

ITS GOOD ITS BEGGING FOR MORE..CHEERS

hi! very nice your acoustic version, why don't you put your voice on it?
good job anyway , dude !
Michel

bass guitar is aggressive

Sweet, nice guitar work.

Awesome !!

Nice!

:) nice guitar playing. Sounds good to me.
Maybe not a real track but who cares?
Maybe you should cut it in 4 bars and load it all up into the loop section. I bet people will love a good acoustic set.

stay tuned
joe

Hi mate cool track! I prefer this version tbh! How much do I loath facebook?? Well we can start with this track! You absolutley nailed it mate! I wish people could just live for the moment and not for how many likes they might get for their staged picture on their stupid fkn facebook page! also how easy is it to swap the C for a K and you get Fakebook! There you go! Very well done to you sir! Thank you for sharing!! Also your voice fits just perfectly! Get it front and centre!!

i love it

GOOD WORK

MASTERFULL!!! YOUR VOICE IS FINE YOU MATCHED YOURSELF UP TO THE MOOD OF THE SONG PERFECT.

i really like the sound of your voice on this track, Sort of a "summer at shattered creek" vibe. only point or suggestion i would make is the toy piano or whatever it happens to be, playing in the background is a little to loud in some spots.. Well in my opinion :) Excellent job keep it up ! Rock on \m/

little sloppy...compare with my ##### level you are the master ,it is very original,interesting track,hope your finger is okey now

brilliant, simply brilliant...your voice is amazing...

hats off, Danke