Beckstar

I would like to say that I am both fan of your voice and of the instrumental part, but the two don't fit together. You sing very well but in a different key. Still a fan though!

uumm...well,beyond you singing notes that I don't know if I had any premission to write about it or not , it's quite sensible point that we are listening to someone who is singing by her deepest sensation and high perceprion while listening the vocal ,also combined instruemntal line is worthy of adoration.regards.
___Behnam.

that joint is hot!!! you just about there with your vocals too....focus and pronounce every word as if you are singing in a chorus its good practice ...you will see results fast...keep it up....i like your style

I agree with a a lot of the comments. Your tone is really nice and your voice has a really nice sound to it. I agree with others that you are off key in a few spots, i would really like you to practice and rerecord it because the melody with the piano is fantastic. Keep practicing you definitely have some talent waiting to come bursting out.

Kyle

Nice effort....
Would require a little toch with vocals,
and probably light drums can spice it into
a complete track.
Keep it up.
cheers!!!

well & maybe I first should say ''wellcome'' .
I think alittle more attention & cretitude & training on solfeggio , could considerably make your heartful & beauty lyrics , more impressive . althought & anyway it's very better than my first track .regards.__Behnam

I really like your singing style, relaxed and whimsical and you have good tone. Just a few parts your pitch was a touch flat but that can be due to the environment you're recording in or nerves! I am currently working on a piece where I just talk into a vocoder and I still get nerves. Takes courage to put yourself out there so keep it up. Agree with Mrwolf. We could help with the accompaniment if you put out an acapella. Thanks for sharing!

Hi Beckstar, very good start! Lovely song!
Maybe if you upload the acapella of this song you may find someone willing to re-arrange it: I like the atmosphere, but I think it would require a bit more than the piano as background.
Keep the good work!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: by the way, the piano loop from Bear is wonderful! But that's no surprise to me.

hey nice track do you do your own producing? i like the vibe with a time i feel you will become a very good artist :) keep up the good work and let your heart guide your music..

Hello Beckstar, In my opinion your voice sounds really good with that piano. What I hear sounds familiar in a way and gets me wondering. Your vocal melody gives me ideas, real catchy Beckstar. Pretty good so far on this track. Nice and chill. Dig the lyrics. Has a feeling of caught in the past. Thanks for sharing with us. Keep going. Peace.