Tysane

Good control you had over the beat...love that and the lyrics as well.

I like the performance on this, and the instrumental is cool too! My only problem is there is a lot of noise in the background of the vocal recording, atleast I think that's where it is. I'm sorry if this was intentional. Good track though!

I kickbox with Jaws. That had me laughing.

I love your wordplay.

You had some good multi's and metta's as well.

I think you should try cleaning up the quality though. You interested in a collab?

- The Artful One

yep downloaded this for my new hip hop collection
the lyrics run perfect with the sounds you created
the point here is with this general get the vocals first then feel the music in your mind and it should run and sound very much like this gem
well done my friend
mr and mrs z

LOVE THE REMIX AND THE FLOW WAS NOT BAD ETHER KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK MAN.CHECK ME OUT ALSO.