GameboiX

I think you have had a bit of creative improvising with you software here. You have the base ideas for a good few songs in this one tune. Time to pick one hookline and develop the song around that one idea. I improvise alot, and I always find out of just letting go a great riff or melody emerges. Hope this helps. Cheers Slap...

goodd

beauty synth work!
excellent as always
gizz.

im all noddin my head over here! love it keep doin ur thing

♥ReBecca Tangie

great choice for the looperman "album"
very very cool track FO SHO!
great stuff, at this rate we will have to sell this album and actually make thick$$$..lol
great job
gizz.

I can't offer you advice, but I know what sounds good... this is great. Keep up the awesome work, it gets easier with each track that's about all I can tell you. TC x Lisa

great track, all of them really.. you got a really good talent there...
wait, you're 15 and you go to college? :S
im also 15.. im a sophmore in highschool,
anyways... keep up the good work

hey im 15 too lol great track i really like this one keep it up like planet says cool sound

cool , you used Fl-Slayer in this track

i like your tracks

really cool Track , i love the melodies
and i like detuned Synth Sounds
good stuff

cool track. keep going and make that track that defines you. You do have really talent, don't let anything get in the way! keep it up. what are your future plans for getting signed? lookin for away in although i don't think my tracks are good enough yet.. I have found a website that puts unsigned artists alongside the pros which you can make money from. it lets you know the standard we are both striving for. http://www.audiojelly.com/index.cfm?action=unsigned_genre.cfm?id=Trance peace.

This is great. Work on your variation.

Got all the makings of the unfolding saga that is music.Levels might be distorting a bit.These pieces of yours are great and could support vox no problem....Go for it!....regards planet

Hi...This has got an almost seventies riff...Almost like MoodyBlues,King Crimson but with a modern aspect of course...Did you say in your Biog that your 15 years old?....Holy shit! if you keep this up you'll be heading places!!...I'm impressed...not at your age but at the...Music..Keep it coming....cheers planet

like the composition and everyting. still needs some work on the details though. to make it a great track needs more than a copple of hours i think!you can say the same about my tracks,i move on to fast and don't spent enouf time on them!

I've leanrt that if you want your sounds not to be blurred/distorted by the louder sounds you have to commpress almost everything, if not everything. It helps a lot! Just take that into consideration. But good stuff guy ^.^

i wouldn't change anything. it's great the way it is. has a nice electronic vibe to it. going in my faves.

ya this with the synth and stuff is cool, just some drums, turn'em up!!

are you using the FPC to program your drums.. if not you may want to try that i found it helped me a lot...

i don't think the drums are that bad just a little loud in places. you have some great melodys in there too. keep going. it's nice to see someone being honest with themselves in persuit of improvement instead of bigging yourself up. Keep on going and if you are enjoying making your tracks then sod every one else. but i think it's pretty cool

i was being a meanie in this comment (lol)

He uses Fruity loops, and that is what I was telling him, that he needs to master it.

Whos katie???? Anyway well, the track kinda sounds gamey????The drums need processing mate, lots, you need a desser or tone down on the high frequencies using an eq and add a compressor on all your parts. If you can tell me what program you used then I can help and review your track better. 3/10 IMO. Read up on some good mastering material and you already did the first step to join a good forum , so bravo on that. Remeber to read the stickies on tips and you can learn allot here mate.

Safe,the famous shamus out.

Drums drums drums... That is all you need to work on.

Ok it needs work. Drum samples again. I forgot to tell you that my song was called "Plasma Thrusters" so check it out.