This is a very powerful song and performance! Your voice is always a pleasure to listen to! I also really like the synth effects near the end of the song, very old school! My one difficulty with this track is regarding the sections where there are two vocal lines, for example starting right around 2:00. I find the noise floor to be way too high in those sections. It doesn't ruin the song or anything, but it is very noticeable. The change in key late in the track is very nice and effective! Overall a wonderful job!
- tone change is always a good weapon when it's used well.
you did it. good! starting from 3:02 the song "takes off" for a second flight.
- example of clipping at 0:46, 1:03, 1:14 ... (it's nothing serious, it takes nothing away from the beauty of this song)
- I am not sure this song could do with a faster pace: I would not augment the BPM. But you know, I am a romantic italian dude and I like slow songs :-)
I like songs that have a lot of space and allow the vocals to shine through like this one does. You have one of the most beautiful voices on the loop, very professional. I like that modulation change around 3:00, very nice. Interesting effects and sounds you used. Very beautiful track Carole!
You're right, leaving some space for vocals to "breathe" and the music to blossom out is highly important, and I confess I was not really aware of that before my sweetheart told me that I sang too much, lol .
I'm very happy you enjoyed this, Wayne and I thank you warmly for your so gentle comment .
You're right, I could improve it but it sounds the way I wanted it to . My heart recognizes itself in this like it is.
I thank you for your encouraging words :D
Best
Love's what I found here amongst you all and I thank life for this wonderful gift . Love's the source of most of my humble songs thus your last words go straight to my heart, Kenny ...
Thx for stopping by and leaving me such a kind message, my friend .
Take care,
Much love to U as well,
Carole
Well I put a lot of heart in it but I'm not sure we can call it a piece of work as I'm a second-rate musician, unfortunately .
I'm very glad you liked what you heard, Scott .
Thx a lot for your positive words :D
Cheers ;)
Tres tres belle ;) Tu as un voix du ciel ;)
Don't speak fluent French though haha but you really made something I liked. Not sure how this combines dubstep though ;d Anyways thanks for sharing this with us and goodluck with other musical projects
What a nice surprise...yet another piece of musical art from our favourite vocalist....and as a bonus there is some excellent accompaniment music...but as always...the vocal is the star...Excellent...............Ed
I'm in the mood for r'n'b too this moment so I guess you'll soon hear from me, Ed ... :D
Isn't it wonderful to read such warm and encouraging words from one of the best musicians here ?! I'm so lucky and happy !
But don't be too good to me, Ed, I might take your words for granted and really think I can win "France's got talent", hehehe ( see my answer to Chris ) .
Thanks a lot my dear friend and do take care,
kisses
I'm the "new Susan Boyle", as someone told me here some weeks ago, hahaha !!
Gee Chris !! I'm so happy to read from you and as always, you drew a big smile on my face with your warm and friendly words.
Oh ... "feathers" ... I do like the metaphor as softness and tenderness were precisely what I wanted to express .
Hope you're fine my sweet friend and I'm sending you a hearty hug .
Kisses :D
Yo Danke sweet !
Oh thanks for your positive review !! :D
Well, I was in the mood for a more intense way of singing and I'm glad you enjoyed it .
Hope you're doing fine !
Kisses ;)
I have never been disappointed with a track of yours! This is great as well. The vocals clip a bit early on but they are easily overlooked. Thank you for the good vibes.
So nice you felt those vibes, Evan :D
That's what mattered most to me while making this .
Thx for your criticism about the clips placing . I confess I didn't have ears any more by the end :S
Bravoooo Carole m what a good U have recognized abouT better interval for accompaniment of those sitar in intro .
and yes , this level of your voice is what I love that veryvery much . Carole after 2':47'' up to modulation , I think U can add a guitar too *rhthm and power or solo anyone).
also this manner in which U change 1.5 or 2 or 3 semitones pitch of matetial to gain a modulation can sound better like thaT by adding a new sound colour like guitar or SaX from that part.in nthe end hey ! what situation it is ? not download not email to me !! I want iT whenever this singer is singing .should I start chelenging U in mail for 4 days and 40 hours to recceive this 4minutes and 40seconds or like a good girl U'll send it by yourself withouT war & bleeding ?hahahaha....oh oh !by the way this beautifull intro of yours made me remember I was supposed to send U an ethnic trial ,oh sorry I had forgot ...right now I'll send.
take care dear Carole.best wishes.___B
Beware beware, Sir ! Remember I told you I'm a "kick"-boxing champion !! ( mmuah ha ha ha !! ) . So think twice, before talking about fighting with me, deary, lol :D
This said, I first thank you for your supportive and advising words, Behnam . You're right about enriching this with a guitar solo or a sax .
So from now on, you will have to play on all my tracks, that's settled ! haha ...
I'm very happy you enjoyed this thingy and stopped by to say it !
Yep, you indeed forgot to send me those ethnic pieces of yours . This deserves a little flick .
"Flick" .
Done .
Haha !
Enough silly talk ... Thx Behnam . 'Goes straight to my
heart .
Take care, deary,
kisses
Tu m'avais caché ça, c'est moi "ton bien aimé" Hahaha!
Un style musical, qui te convient parfaitement aussi. C'est cool avec changement de ton .... qui redonne comme dirait l'autre, un regain d'intérêt. Tu as suivi une bonne école.
Bon j'arrête le délire, et un grand bravo pour cet instant musical.
Pour le changement de ton, je suis allée à bonne école .... ;)
Ton avis compte beaucoup pour moi, Dan, et je suis heureuse que tu te sois arrêté ici et que tu aies apprécié l'écoute .
Avec un peu de recul ( aarrgghh ), j'aurais peut-être pu augmenter le bpm pour que ça soit un tantinet plus énergique, non ?
Je rêve de pouvoir composer des merveilles comme tu le fais, mais ...
Je suis déjà très chanceuse que tu fasses appel à moi et j'espère que nous continuerons l'aventure .
Merci pour ton com souriant et espiègle,
Gros bisous,
Carole
Hello Carole, motivating expression. She does have a beautiful heart. I like the selection you chose for this time. Reminds me of a familiar place. Enjoyed the connection you have with your music, especially songs like these that capture a good view of you. Your covers are really nice to listen and one could believe what you achieved is an adaptation that suits the feelings you invoke. I also couldn't hear any noticeable issues with this take. Thank you for sharing with us Peace.
Wowwww! Des nuances, encore des nuances, toujours des nuances à couper le souffle ....
Qu'écrire ici, qui n'a pas déjà été écrit? Tu as le don d'envelopper l'auditeur avec ce que tu réalises vocalement .... Merci de partager ces moments si magiques .... et je sais de quoi "je parle" ici.
C'était pas évident avec les "Loops" que tu as choisi, mais tu t'en sort brillamment.
Bon week-end à toi ....
Well, maybe the loops don't really match all together and it may have made you think of a mix of several tracks . I guess you're right .
Thx for stopping by and leaving nice words .
Carole it's great and worthy of greatest adoration and respects & for sure your love will love iT .I can say musicallY it's great to change center of tonality each 2 measure , & this graduallY would be known for your listener as a tarrent of your compositions ,and in fact as your self style and particulary according to loving 12tones system in music , I enjoy this tarrent of your composition .just in seconds @21'' when Franco's guitar loop is heared , U've mixed 2 guitar loops (both by Franco)which are sounding
a bit dissonance if U pay a good attention .for gaining that note(I can underestand U'd meanT that Tonic note to be played by guitar behind your meldy vocal)U can change the pitch of both loops to 2 differenT interval which don't sound dissonance buT give U that first note of that measure for your vocal .hope U'll underestand the waY I've told U.anyway We'll talk..take care.____Behnam
Hi Behnam :D
Well, I hope that beyond the poor quality of this thingy, he will listen with his heart .
You're perfectly right about Ferryterry's guitars . As I told Domenico, I didn't use the original tempo and I should have . My ears didn't hear that dissonance but I'm glad your experienced ones had and that you told me about it . I'll be more careful next time .
Thx a lot for your pointed advice and analysis, Sir . Much appreciated .
Take care,
xoxo
Yeah ... "horribly painful" as I did an awful job with the mastering, haha .
But I'm happy you survived to it and enjoyed it nonetheless .
My best wishes in return,
Carole
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Wonderful song.
I'll keep it short:
- catchy chorus. Liked a lot.
- good job with the "subtle" backing vocals.
- tone change is always a good weapon when it's used well.
you did it. good! starting from 3:02 the song "takes off" for a second flight.
- example of clipping at 0:46, 1:03, 1:14 ... (it's nothing serious, it takes nothing away from the beauty of this song)
- I am not sure this song could do with a faster pace: I would not augment the BPM. But you know, I am a romantic italian dude and I like slow songs :-)
Thanks again for this gem Carole.
Ciao, Domenico
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I listen to sounded, hear the voice, a great song to dream and relax.
Really well done, I like it very much!
Cheers ;)
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Wayne
You're right, leaving some space for vocals to "breathe" and the music to blossom out is highly important, and I confess I was not really aware of that before my sweetheart told me that I sang too much, lol .
I'm very happy you enjoyed this, Wayne and I thank you warmly for your so gentle comment .
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the amazing thing is how you start it but you can make it better ;)
I thank you for your encouraging words :D
Best
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Much love to you. K;)
Thx for stopping by and leaving me such a kind message, my friend .
Take care,
Much love to U as well,
Carole
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Cheers,
Scott
I'm very glad you liked what you heard, Scott .
Thx a lot for your positive words :D
Cheers ;)
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Your gentle words touch me a lot .
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Don't speak fluent French though haha but you really made something I liked. Not sure how this combines dubstep though ;d Anyways thanks for sharing this with us and goodluck with other musical projects
Aw ... thx a lot for these words in my native tongue, Johnnyproducing :D
I do appreciate them :)
Thx for your warm comment and good wishes . I wish you the same with a big smile .
Carole
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Isn't it wonderful to read such warm and encouraging words from one of the best musicians here ?! I'm so lucky and happy !
But don't be too good to me, Ed, I might take your words for granted and really think I can win "France's got talent", hehehe ( see my answer to Chris ) .
Thanks a lot my dear friend and do take care,
kisses
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And i love the song too lol.!
This is so lovely,it makes me feel like im dancing of feathers in a world of bliss!
This is superb work carole,You and your vocals are an awesome gift,and you use them to perfection!.
J'espère qu'un jour, que vous et votre belle voix obtient un contrat de changement de vie.!
Votre trop belle pour se glisser sous le radar.!
très très belle chaud au cœur piste de huggability!.
***chris***
Gee Chris !! I'm so happy to read from you and as always, you drew a big smile on my face with your warm and friendly words.
Oh ... "feathers" ... I do like the metaphor as softness and tenderness were precisely what I wanted to express .
Hope you're fine my sweet friend and I'm sending you a hearty hug .
Kisses :D
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This is a new tone of your voice...How many more do you have?
You are right it easily could be an r'n'b song...
Very much liked it
Kisses, Danke
Oh thanks for your positive review !! :D
Well, I was in the mood for a more intense way of singing and I'm glad you enjoyed it .
Hope you're doing fine !
Kisses ;)
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Evan
That's what mattered most to me while making this .
Thx for your criticism about the clips placing . I confess I didn't have ears any more by the end :S
Cheers,
Carole
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and yes , this level of your voice is what I love that veryvery much . Carole after 2':47'' up to modulation , I think U can add a guitar too *rhthm and power or solo anyone).
also this manner in which U change 1.5 or 2 or 3 semitones pitch of matetial to gain a modulation can sound better like thaT by adding a new sound colour like guitar or SaX from that part.in nthe end hey ! what situation it is ? not download not email to me !! I want iT whenever this singer is singing .should I start chelenging U in mail for 4 days and 40 hours to recceive this 4minutes and 40seconds or like a good girl U'll send it by yourself withouT war & bleeding ?hahahaha....oh oh !by the way this beautifull intro of yours made me remember I was supposed to send U an ethnic trial ,oh sorry I had forgot ...right now I'll send.
take care dear Carole.best wishes.___B
This said, I first thank you for your supportive and advising words, Behnam . You're right about enriching this with a guitar solo or a sax .
So from now on, you will have to play on all my tracks, that's settled ! haha ...
I'm very happy you enjoyed this thingy and stopped by to say it !
Yep, you indeed forgot to send me those ethnic pieces of yours . This deserves a little flick .
"Flick" .
Done .
Haha !
Enough silly talk ... Thx Behnam . 'Goes straight to my
heart .
Take care, deary,
kisses
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TanX for this track and your cool voice.
Keep goin on PLZ.
Happy you liked it .
Yeah, I'll do, for sure .
Cheers
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Tu m'avais caché ça, c'est moi "ton bien aimé" Hahaha!
Un style musical, qui te convient parfaitement aussi. C'est cool avec changement de ton .... qui redonne comme dirait l'autre, un regain d'intérêt. Tu as suivi une bonne école.
Bon j'arrête le délire, et un grand bravo pour cet instant musical.
Dan
Ton avis compte beaucoup pour moi, Dan, et je suis heureuse que tu te sois arrêté ici et que tu aies apprécié l'écoute .
Avec un peu de recul ( aarrgghh ), j'aurais peut-être pu augmenter le bpm pour que ça soit un tantinet plus énergique, non ?
Je rêve de pouvoir composer des merveilles comme tu le fais, mais ...
Je suis déjà très chanceuse que tu fasses appel à moi et j'espère que nous continuerons l'aventure .
Merci pour ton com souriant et espiègle,
Gros bisous,
Carole
ps : J'avance ... 10 pages de tapées, hier :D
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Heureuse de ton appréciation
;)
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Wowwww! Des nuances, encore des nuances, toujours des nuances à couper le souffle ....
Qu'écrire ici, qui n'a pas déjà été écrit? Tu as le don d'envelopper l'auditeur avec ce que tu réalises vocalement .... Merci de partager ces moments si magiques .... et je sais de quoi "je parle" ici.
C'était pas évident avec les "Loops" que tu as choisi, mais tu t'en sort brillamment.
Bon week-end à toi ....
Dan
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Thx for stopping by and leaving nice words .
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a bit dissonance if U pay a good attention .for gaining that note(I can underestand U'd meanT that Tonic note to be played by guitar behind your meldy vocal)U can change the pitch of both loops to 2 differenT interval which don't sound dissonance buT give U that first note of that measure for your vocal .hope U'll underestand the waY I've told U.anyway We'll talk..take care.____Behnam
Well, I hope that beyond the poor quality of this thingy, he will listen with his heart .
You're perfectly right about Ferryterry's guitars . As I told Domenico, I didn't use the original tempo and I should have . My ears didn't hear that dissonance but I'm glad your experienced ones had and that you told me about it . I'll be more careful next time .
Thx a lot for your pointed advice and analysis, Sir . Much appreciated .
Take care,
xoxo
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merci Dear LADY, horribly painful but visionary beautiful...
But I'm happy you survived to it and enjoyed it nonetheless .
My best wishes in return,
Carole