I liked the first two minutes, the start was fine, but then gradually lost similarity to oroginal, yet was so great christmas reminded me one more time.
I love how the bass line keeps dragging itself under, it really seems to draw the beat along. You are quite talented. If you ever want to work together or something let me know. Thanks for sharing your tracks!
Amazing, really great track. The guitar is excellent in my opinion, and very groovy. This puts me in mind of some of the stuff trent reznor did on Ghosts I-IV. I honestly can't think of any critisism.
The lyrics really spoke to me, and how I've been feeling lately. They make me feel less alone. Thank you.
I like the mood. Big time. it's like I punch you in the face mood.
Early NIN, meets ministry, meets a punch in the lip.
FUCKING AWESOME GUITAR! HOW DID YOU EQ THAT!? The end progression is the shit.
Delay on the hi-hat? might sound cool as crap.
Oh.. and check out Izotope Ozone... Don't know how compatible it is with FL.. but it has everything you need to make each track sparkle. Takes a large load on the CPU and memory tho. just recommending it. It's like 59 bucks or something, and worth every penny. (Audition has Izotope ingrained in its EQ stuff, but it is a really a live recording program... imo...)
I know a lot of people hate reverb, but this song might become larger with some reverb. Especially on the drums. Plate Reverb.
Please don't think I am ragging, I am just giving you my honest opinion.
(My songs sound waaaaay shittier lol)
Were this the actual full version of the song, I had to edit some of the end, and I did a mild edit and added some more guitar action to it. Here are the lyrics though...
Verse 1 time 1:00
What could I do to make you see
What's left is not much inside me
What could I do to make you know
That there's not much room left to grow
What could I do to make you see
What was once there has left me
What could I do to make you understand
There's not much left to this man
Bridge 1 time 1:48
Everytime I look in your eyes
Something inside me slowly dies
I can I can't I will I won't face me
Everytime I feel those lips
Something inside me loses grip
I can't I can I won't I will give it all to
Chorus time 2:12
You!!!!!!
I can I can't give it you!!!!!!
I will I won't give it to you!!!!!!
I can't give everything
I won't give everything to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!!
I already have...
Verse 2 time 3:24
How many times have we played this game
It's like I'm lost inside a name
How many tears must I hide
To make it out of here alive
How many lives must we live
Without another reason to give
Up that little piece in our mind
That lets us live so deprived...
Bridge 2 time 4:12
Everytime I look into my soul
I see something filling this hole
I can I can't I will I won't see me without...
Chorus time 4:23
You!!!!!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I gave my everything to...
You are my everything, you are... you are...
You!!! You are...
You!!! You are...
You!!!
And now it all feels right...
End 5:11
I can I can't give it you!
I will I won't give it to you!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I am I am you are you are
Everything that is right
I am I am you are you are
Everything that I need
You!!!!
You!!!!
You!!!!
You are all that matters...
this has a really moody vibe to it, i can see a muscle man walking down the road smashing up everything in site ha ha them guitar riffs at the end are pretty sick man good job
woahh!!!
that's absolutely crazy ....
it's really surprising to hear that loop speeded down this way, cool!!
but the highlight is for sure the bassline!!!
that's just perfect ... love it ...
very interesting track, very interesting ...
thank you!!
Nice sax loops( super funky). Nice track all round, great beat and mix. the production sits well and you have some cool changes in this track... Cheers Slap...
I never listen to techno, but this sounds not like techno to me, and it can't be techno cause I like it!!!!!
(and this is no offend against techno fans ... it's just a matter of taste ...)
whoaah!!!
that's awesome man ... very very appreciated!!
I love the filters on the guitar, make them sound even darker ...
that's great, thx a lot ...
can't wait to hear the finished track!!
i liked it, the acoustic part was excellent. i couldn't help but hear an extension to that, but i think it would end up sounding too classical, i'd like to instead hear some fuzz guitar at the end.
i never really cared for Canon that much but this track breathes some life into the work, and i like the 80's happy sounding synths, to me that's what it reminds me of i mean i could hear some poppish female vocals singing something about balloons and candy.
sounds cool for a throw together. the only thing that didn't fit to me was the bleep in the main loop, what was that a cowbell? take it out if you can or at least try layering another sound over it to see the change in effect.
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The lyrics really spoke to me, and how I've been feeling lately. They make me feel less alone. Thank you.
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Cheers slap...
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SpAzz
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It's really good. With a live ensemble this would own peoples faces.
Add that fuzz guitar solo at the 3 minute mark!! Just play like one note tremelo stuff!! it would sound sick!
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Early NIN, meets ministry, meets a punch in the lip.
FUCKING AWESOME GUITAR! HOW DID YOU EQ THAT!? The end progression is the shit.
Delay on the hi-hat? might sound cool as crap.
Oh.. and check out Izotope Ozone... Don't know how compatible it is with FL.. but it has everything you need to make each track sparkle. Takes a large load on the CPU and memory tho. just recommending it. It's like 59 bucks or something, and worth every penny. (Audition has Izotope ingrained in its EQ stuff, but it is a really a live recording program... imo...)
I know a lot of people hate reverb, but this song might become larger with some reverb. Especially on the drums. Plate Reverb.
Please don't think I am ragging, I am just giving you my honest opinion.
(My songs sound waaaaay shittier lol)
Verse 1 time 1:00
What could I do to make you see
What's left is not much inside me
What could I do to make you know
That there's not much room left to grow
What could I do to make you see
What was once there has left me
What could I do to make you understand
There's not much left to this man
Bridge 1 time 1:48
Everytime I look in your eyes
Something inside me slowly dies
I can I can't I will I won't face me
Everytime I feel those lips
Something inside me loses grip
I can't I can I won't I will give it all to
Chorus time 2:12
You!!!!!!
I can I can't give it you!!!!!!
I will I won't give it to you!!!!!!
I can't give everything
I won't give everything to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!! to...
You!!!!
I already have...
Verse 2 time 3:24
How many times have we played this game
It's like I'm lost inside a name
How many tears must I hide
To make it out of here alive
How many lives must we live
Without another reason to give
Up that little piece in our mind
That lets us live so deprived...
Bridge 2 time 4:12
Everytime I look into my soul
I see something filling this hole
I can I can't I will I won't see me without...
Chorus time 4:23
You!!!!!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I gave my everything to...
You are my everything, you are... you are...
You!!! You are...
You!!! You are...
You!!!
And now it all feels right...
End 5:11
I can I can't give it you!
I will I won't give it to you!
I can't see myself without you!
I won't see myself without you!
I am I am you are you are
Everything that is right
I am I am you are you are
Everything that I need
You!!!!
You!!!!
You!!!!
You are all that matters...
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S.D.M
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that's absolutely crazy ....
it's really surprising to hear that loop speeded down this way, cool!!
but the highlight is for sure the bassline!!!
that's just perfect ... love it ...
very interesting track, very interesting ...
thank you!!
peace, rei
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(and this is no offend against techno fans ... it's just a matter of taste ...)
another very interesting track ...
cool!!
peace, rei
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but it's great, really like it ...
good composition, great dynamics, awesome!!
peace, rei
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that's awesome man ... very very appreciated!!
I love the filters on the guitar, make them sound even darker ...
that's great, thx a lot ...
can't wait to hear the finished track!!
peace, rei
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