This is a very smooth style! I hear what you mean about liking clean sounds, and you've done a great job sticking with that! I'm a little sad that you don't want your tunes on loopradio, I wanted to play it too. Oh well, I understand. Really nice work though, I like it much!
Hi Spiv.. About the radio, well I just don't wanna end up in trouble if the owners of the acapellas I used decides to take legal action.. The acapellas is to be used in a noncommercial use only..
But anyways I am happy to hear that you like it, I have made a new version of this with a even cleaner sound and a different rhythm. Take a listen to it https://soundcloud.com/peter-nirell/pages-of-my-past-feat-farisha
hey ! from beyond of this monitor , my thumb up as like & respects bith to U who We're his guest for listening such a welldone track . good job . looperman has no many traX in such style.best wishes.___Behnam
This is beautiful!
I think the solo sound is OK: I understand you may want to have it sounding "bigger" but I think the current one is better suited for this "old school" track.
Outstanding work!
Loved.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I would like to have a "slower" fade out in the end, twice or three time the length of the current one. You cannot end this wonderful piece of music so "abruptly" :-)
Hi Domenico and thanks for the comment. Naa not bigger sound but a little more feel to it, it sound so stiff.. well the damage is done and I just leave it like it is.. Next project will be better. Thanx for the tip about the fading,I will have that in mind in my future projects.
nice work my friend. I love the sound sort of a female version of simply red in some ways. or maybe not..I have a cold and I took Nyquill! But I did like it.
Steve
Hi Steve and thanks for your comment.. yea it must be your cold and the nyquill you took.. But maybe it sounds just a little bit like his style.. If you don't know me by now tra la la la laaa... That song, same tempo and groove almost.
This is a beautiful sort of pop song! Patricia's vocals are always top notch, and you've made a great bed for them to lie in! Awesome guitar work, I thing the telecaster suits this song very well! Very cool organ part too, gives it just a touch of reggae I think! In my opinion the mix sounds excellent! Some more mastering could possibly enhance it, but not necessary. A good non destructive compromise would be to just normalize it. I like to normalize to like -.5 to -.3 dB. It will of course raise the noise floor, but not as much as a limiter would, and it doesn't sound like you have too much noise going on. Just a thought. Thanks for the great morning listen!
Hi Spivkurl thanks for your comment and all the mixing tips but mixing music is not my thing.. Tumbleweed gave me tips too and said he would help me with my next project.. And if you're up to it I could send you a copy too to work with, just let me know.
Wow, I just replied to two of your comments and clicked on 'tracks' and up pops this little jewel! An absolute beauty, all around, and what's wrong with that guitar solo! I thinks it's great...Leave it in. Drums are good, too. Patricia, well, what can you say that hasn't already been said.
Thanks Scott.. All my tracks are jewels..lol
The thing with the git is the sound and the feel of it. I used my Telecaster and should've picked my Stratocaster or maybe my Steinberger with humbuckers to get a thicker sound.
Thanx monsterage.. At first I was planning to record a new geetar but I changed my mind. At least it's in the right key..
Oh the 80's And I was going for that old sound from the 50's-60's....
Hi Soulkettle and thanx for your comment.. Yes it's right up my street too, It is a bit different from what i use to play (reggae). But it is fun to try out new ways to play music.
Hey Peter...I`d be happy to help you make some noise any time....Love those old Marvin Gaye, Al Gren et all songs...I dont always get it right but if I can lend a hand just hit me up when you have something that you are working on...keep on...Ed
Hi crucethus and thanx for your comment. I'm working on a new solo and writing a new sound to my Boss GT-100. Going for a mor soft approach, Less is more and If I put some feel into it,it might sound better.
Hi Baggadub...I was referring the the overall track volume...but I`m really reluctant to suggest you change anything (we all have gain controls on whatever we use to listen)...I really dislike those mixes that have been nailed with brick wall limiting to the point of killing the natural dynamics....You could try a mix with a soft knee compressor on the master bus at about -3dBs of gain (try a threshold of -10, attack around 20-30ms,& auto gain makeup...Follow with a master limiter that has a preset for cd audio..or just set it so you get a few dBs of gain without disortion)....or better yet...dont do anything...I probably should have skipped that comment as you really have done a super job on the music and that is what counts........If you would like me to bump it up a bit for you without screwing up your dynamics just use my contact button & I`ll tell you my email.....Those really loud tracks you see here once in a while with the flat edges (like a ruler) mainly in the dance genres are dynamically dead....I crindge when I listen....Its good like it is....Keep on.....Ed
Thanx Ed.. I just leave it like it is, But maybe you could help me mix the next song if you are willing and have the time. At the moment I don't work on any but having plans to do a "Marvin Gaye" cover or something like that, but the problem is I can't sing that well, or I'm afraid to hear my own voice..
Classic old time tune which never tires...a really good production however I would have liked more guitar solo somewhere in the middle just to break up the singing...nice stuff!
Hi srbrown7 and thanx for your comment. Yea that would be great with more guitar but I don't have the guts to cut up Patricias work. But maybe If I'll find the right acapella with a 16 bars of silence it could happend.
Well, what to say... smooth and very catchy... been listen to your instrumental version, and have to say that Farisha's pella fit to this tune very well. Good job mate.
You can count that this tune will be heard thru Loop Radio.
Hi WaPer and thanx for your comment.. I have this version of it too. https://soundcloud.com/peter-nirell/pages-of-my-past-feat-farisha
I wrote the music to this acapella that's why it fits like a glove.
Well about the radio I hope they don't play any of my songs there because they can't use it without permission, It's a royalty thing.
But anyways glad you like it and take a listen to the version on sc it got another kinda swing to it..
on Pages of my past Feat Farisha by Baggadub
But anyways I am happy to hear that you like it, I have made a new version of this with a even cleaner sound and a different rhythm. Take a listen to it
https://soundcloud.com/peter-nirell/pages-of-my-past-feat-farisha
Rock on..
on Pages of my past Feat Farisha by Baggadub
on Pages of my past Feat Farisha by Baggadub
Respectfully,
Brandon Michelle
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
this was really nice and chilling :D
keep up the good work
I'm glad you like it...
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Rock on
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
I think the solo sound is OK: I understand you may want to have it sounding "bigger" but I think the current one is better suited for this "old school" track.
Outstanding work!
Loved.
Ciao, Domenico
PS: I would like to have a "slower" fade out in the end, twice or three time the length of the current one. You cannot end this wonderful piece of music so "abruptly" :-)
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Steve
Rock on Steve...
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Rock on Spiv..
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
I'm glad you like this track..
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Rock on..
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
All the best
Maff
Peter.
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Cheers,
Scott
The thing with the git is the sound and the feel of it. I used my Telecaster and should've picked my Stratocaster or maybe my Steinberger with humbuckers to get a thicker sound.
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
btw the guitar at the end sounds just perfect.
Oh the 80's And I was going for that old sound from the 50's-60's....
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Peter
on Pages of my past Feat Farisha by Baggadub
Cheers!
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
One good thing about music when it hits, you feel no pain..
Rock on
Peter
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
Peter..
on Ill do anything for you feat Patricia Edwards by Baggadub
on Pages of my past Feat Farisha by Baggadub
You can count that this tune will be heard thru Loop Radio.
Keep your work
Cheers
Waper
https://soundcloud.com/peter-nirell/pages-of-my-past-feat-farisha
I wrote the music to this acapella that's why it fits like a glove.
Well about the radio I hope they don't play any of my songs there because they can't use it without permission, It's a royalty thing.
But anyways glad you like it and take a listen to the version on sc it got another kinda swing to it..
Peter