Malkontent42

It sounds great.

I like this track as is. I enjoyed the listen. I don't claim to know much but when I listened one thing I would experiment with is dropping the drums out a couple of times. I think it was right around 0:48 when the vocals come back might work but for sure I would try experimenting with a short pause at 1:00 for the beat and then bring it back. I think that might make a nice impact. But I don't know anything and could be way off... :)

Bro, you asked for advice yourself.

Look, theres this thing called harmony. Without it, nothing really lands. No matter how dope the vocals or how sweet the melody, your track still wont truly hit people in the feels.

Im just keeping it real, no negativity. I really hope you hear me out. I get it when youre making your own music, every riff or hook you write might sound like straight fire to you. But the truth is, its not there yet.

A lot of people here are super nice and dont want to hurt anyones feelings, so instead of giving real constructive feedback, they just gas you up with praise.

Dont get me wrong Ill give you props too. Youre doing your thing. Youre putting in the work. Thats seriously cool. But if you wanna make truly great music, you first need to study the greats or learn from someone whos been around the block.

Youve got it in you to write a killer track. And honestly, this one? For someone whos still learning? Its actually pretty solid."

Let me know if you'd like a version that sounds more like a voice note from a producer friend.

Hello my friend !! I love this track exactly as it is .....!!! To my ears , this is a top notch work overall !!! Cheerssssssssssssss !!!

V cinematic I can imagine this on a mysterious perfume Ad. Love the switch up in intensity at 0.24 and the classic HH/Trap bell sounds

V Danceable, catchy tune

Brilliant! That Dubstep beat around the meandering yet punchy somehow O Darka vocals, just works !

I am reading your answers to the previous comments and I recognize a person with love for music creation and beautiful feelings about the way collaborations may happen on LM. You know all that is radiating from your song, it is the way you work and how you believe things would be. And it is a very successful effort, it is a song, well constructed and performed. I would like a minute more too, and that means I just wanted more of this pleasure listening to a beautiful song.
Best regards, Anthony

I love the infectious rhythm in this - it sucks you in but you know there is fear underneath it.

Def like it tho. Nice work. I meant to lead with that lol

I like the melody. Are you trying something different with this one? Experimenting isnt just a good thing, its key to growth and evolution. Just messing around with whatever comes to mind can tell you alot about what your musical instincts are, and what your strengths are. Or could be. I like Charvox, but I would've went a different route, like maybe some faint ethnic chanting, and maybe add a refrain with another verse/vocal

Hello Malkontent42, very cool track , I like it a lot. Its got that intriguing something that I can't name but its a nice piece of work......great job

i like the melodies in this. the drums compliment it nicely. not the biggest fan of the vocals but i think my tastes are just different . nice work

thats not a bad piece at all, vocals are good bro, another 1 min would be better gives you a 3 min piece but as you say your learning 2 mins is ok lol, be proud bruv its a good work, it may have been put up as a pop accapella, but this piece is more trap sounding than pop to me, but that's not important really, nice upload and welcome to the community

Hey I downloaded the song and would like to upload this song. It's yours but if you allow me to upload it I'll tell the story about it in the description.

I liked it too. Kinda neat.

I love cinematic stuff - u used some of my favorite elements of it, too. Love those strings man. I loved this whole thing, honestly

Wow magnifico - those strings add a layer of irony - like a dark comedy and there is almost a Tudorian New World feeling about this

Peak cinematic track!

It's legendary

Good track, I liked it when the guitar kicks in. It's definitely a bit of a juxtapostion as the vocals are quite lively and uplifting and the music has a bit dark undercurrent to it, but it works really well together and makes it stand out. Good stuff.

Fresh and modern - delightful tune

Yes, it is exactly as you described it. It has a very beautiful musical style, with vocals that are ideal for the track, and the musical arrangement is very successful. Overall, it is a very nice piece of work.
I should also say that it is hybrid electronic. It contains many analog elements, warm vocals, and a warmer master overall. I liked it very much.
Chris LINEAR FADE Band

Congratulations my friend !!!!!!! This project (your work) was very difficult to highlight the vocals !! I thought about working with these specific vocals but ultimately didn't try it thinking it was outside my field. Bravo !!!!! Cheersssssssssss !!

Really cool song. You blended vocal nicely in there.
Good job!