Thank you for your comment. The intro is very long and i agree that it makes it a bit repetitive. Later on it is better. Maybe I should have shortened the first part. A lesson for the future :p.
Although I don't listen much to that kind of music, I must say this is very nicely done...a lot of changes in the sound to prevent monotony and very silud and clean production...you have good things going on...keep up good work!
I can see why you didn't add a drop :3
To be honest, I would call this a chill-out electro because it's pretty much constant.
Overall, you've done a great job!
Sweet intro to this piece, really loving it, good use of the vocals, has a nice electronic sound about it, building nicely into the piece, very much like the way you have arranged this one, another thing too mate, nice clarity of your mix, impressive work, nothing to fault here from this end...Fav'd...very enjoyable listen...Thank you...Mosaic...
Had to check this one out when saw trance genre, as that's the genre I normally do, this is very different style and sound then what I do but really enjoying this progressive sounding piece you have don't, great arrangement, nice sounds, sort of reminds me of electronic feel with a touch of trance feel...either way very nice listen, keep at mate...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
Man I am loving this track! If uplifting was the goal then you nailed it. The only critique I have for it is at 2:50ish the piano loop repeats oddly. Im pretty new to this so I am not really certain to explain in detail. Anyway Im digging this song.
I actually think I could master this for you. Could I try? What do you use for software, is it Ableton? Cause that's what I use. If you have Ableton, you could send me the project to my email. Let me know! :D
That's not at all what I said. When I said Martin Garrix, I meant his choice of the darker chorus synth he uses before the beat drops. You know, the one with the complicated melody? You should use a synth like that. Also, like I said, look at Calvin Harris' Summer jam! If you want your song to scream "summer", you should seriously get some help by studying that song. I'm not kidding, this song is just not complete.
I hope I was of a little more help to you, and that I could make myself more clear this time around. ;)
-CG5
Alright, I'm gonna give you a lot of advice, so stick around.
You should get a really nice juicy hardstyle bass to drop with the song, as well as some sidechain with the chorus synth at the drop. The beginning is bright too. There's not enough reverb on a lot of your chosen synths, and there should be some more echo going on, plus the synths should be darker. I know you said you were trying to make it a happy song, but when a song is too bright, it can cheer you up, but it won't be super incredible. I really think the idea is here, but it needs more variation, plus more complicated-sounding synths. Look at Martin Garrix's Animals, and Calvin Harris' Summer, and create a blend of the two to finish this song, and make it into a really epic and fully complete song.
-CG5
So what you are actually saying i have to change the complete song and make it another martin garrix copy. I really am not into that. But ty for giving me your well ment advice.
Wow, man, really like the progression, transition, and layout of this track. It really told a story. I'm having a hard time finding bad music tonight. lol
I ain't much into trance genre myself, but I found this pretty entertaining and enjoyable. Smooth flow of this groovy delight and some nice changes make this track really good fun to listen to! It could even be my temporary favourite...and it is actualy!:)
love it... and I'm not a huge fan of trance but i listen to all genres still, the flow is amazing... sounds great too... and follow father wax advice stick to what you do best and keep your head high, always best to lead than follow a crowd...
nah! smile cos its a happy tune dude! :)
what could you do better? keep doing what yoom doin, stop worrying what others may think, do what YOU think is right.
i am no more than a bedroom dj who just loves music, all of it, if it sounds good i play it....simples..
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Congrats_______Orlando
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To be honest, I would call this a chill-out electro because it's pretty much constant.
Overall, you've done a great job!
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Sweet intro to this piece, really loving it, good use of the vocals, has a nice electronic sound about it, building nicely into the piece, very much like the way you have arranged this one, another thing too mate, nice clarity of your mix, impressive work, nothing to fault here from this end...Fav'd...very enjoyable listen...Thank you...Mosaic...
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I Love the synth thru out the track.
Intro brilliant
Start-up brilliant
Overall, it is a brilliant track.
Well done
Jamid
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Had to check this one out when saw trance genre, as that's the genre I normally do, this is very different style and sound then what I do but really enjoying this progressive sounding piece you have don't, great arrangement, nice sounds, sort of reminds me of electronic feel with a touch of trance feel...either way very nice listen, keep at mate...Fav...Peace n Respect...Mosaic...
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I hope I was of a little more help to you, and that I could make myself more clear this time around. ;)
-CG5
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You should get a really nice juicy hardstyle bass to drop with the song, as well as some sidechain with the chorus synth at the drop. The beginning is bright too. There's not enough reverb on a lot of your chosen synths, and there should be some more echo going on, plus the synths should be darker. I know you said you were trying to make it a happy song, but when a song is too bright, it can cheer you up, but it won't be super incredible. I really think the idea is here, but it needs more variation, plus more complicated-sounding synths. Look at Martin Garrix's Animals, and Calvin Harris' Summer, and create a blend of the two to finish this song, and make it into a really epic and fully complete song.
-CG5
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Great job welldone.
Jamid
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Compliments______Orlando
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what could you do better? keep doing what yoom doin, stop worrying what others may think, do what YOU think is right.
i am no more than a bedroom dj who just loves music, all of it, if it sounds good i play it....simples..
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