Yepp! I have agree with wongkishoo.
There was was a bit of clipping there!, as for the kick it strikes above every element but still impressed as far as the whole sequence is concerned.
Filling out space inbetween there n there with melodic synthesisers definetly would spice up the tune!
Im loving the tune!!....
But going back wouldn't be such a bad idea afterall.
Whoooa that kick really hits ya on the intro lol..
My initial thoughts: I'm drawn straight to the mix and how muddy it is.. plenty of clipping going on as well.. maybe something that needs more work? It actually sounds like you have a bit crusher on the master channel in places..
You don't need to have everything *really* loud when you mix.. it just destroys the stereo image and isn't so pleasant to listen to.
As to the track it's self - some pretty cool ideas going on man, everything's in tune lol.. maybe a bit of variation on the melodies would enhance the track as well.
Yeah, as far as the mixing goes, I really messed up this one. :/
I tried to find a balance between the song I was remixing and my original material, but in the end I guess I ended up making them both too loud...
I'll definately keep your words in mind when I go back to fix it.
Thanks for taking the time to critiqe my work, it really means alot. I love getting feedback from people who actually know what they're doing (in case you couldn't tell, I'm pretty new at this. This was only the second remix I've ever done.)
on Essential Javstar Remix by Thefly94
There was was a bit of clipping there!, as for the kick it strikes above every element but still impressed as far as the whole sequence is concerned.
Filling out space inbetween there n there with melodic synthesisers definetly would spice up the tune!
Im loving the tune!!....
But going back wouldn't be such a bad idea afterall.
Keep it up boss!!!...(kings)
Yeah, I'll definitely be taking another look at this one.
on Essential Javstar Remix by Thefly94
My initial thoughts: I'm drawn straight to the mix and how muddy it is.. plenty of clipping going on as well.. maybe something that needs more work? It actually sounds like you have a bit crusher on the master channel in places..
You don't need to have everything *really* loud when you mix.. it just destroys the stereo image and isn't so pleasant to listen to.
As to the track it's self - some pretty cool ideas going on man, everything's in tune lol.. maybe a bit of variation on the melodies would enhance the track as well.
Just some food for thought :)
Keep Jammin' man
WongKi
Yeah, as far as the mixing goes, I really messed up this one. :/
I tried to find a balance between the song I was remixing and my original material, but in the end I guess I ended up making them both too loud...
I'll definately keep your words in mind when I go back to fix it.
Thanks for taking the time to critiqe my work, it really means alot. I love getting feedback from people who actually know what they're doing (in case you couldn't tell, I'm pretty new at this. This was only the second remix I've ever done.)
on The Hunt - Part 2 by Thefly94