Gizmo1205

Wow what lovely sultry Latino voices and this is so different it is beautiful - I didn't want this one to end

Wow a real disturbing dystopian homage to injustice and corruption - v cinematic and v well thought-out

I'm sorry to hear about your pet! But when I read the dedication and your name is Gizmo, I was confused... But I get it now. Condolences, these things hurt!

Great track and I think you've been tinkering with it the past weeks, right?

Replying to your reply, yeah uhm if you want that offbeat style, I think you can pull that off. You might consider looking into audio manipulation. That's how I initially started making music. Especially since I started with small app known as Ezmuse + then going from that to Mixcraft. Either way, I'll check back after some time if I remember too. I'd love to hear the changes you make. I still think you made a really good song.

The song is really good, I like the beat and the rythem you got going. The only thing I would not to me if felt like the Female vocals at the beginning we're clashing with the beat. Then at the end. The strings also just don't seem to match the beat. I'm not a fan of that clash if that's intended.

Oh dude this ##### is sick asf! hearing this at a rave would def be a vibe!

Nice track mate. It's kinda chill but that distorted bass gives it that right amount of power that I like. The vocals are also beautiful. Very well put together overall. Great work.

This song has evolved, for sure. It looks like my brother's advice has too, He almost sounds like me lol. Anyway we all enjoyed watching the track grow

True artists continue working on their art, sometimes for months or years at a time. Sometimes they dont come back to it for years, even decades. Persistence in the face of adversity, and also staying true to the vision that was ultimately was YOURS is very admirable. We have heard massive improvements from the first time we listened to now, so congratulations on that. This is your personal journey and your tribute to your fallen friend, and its only right that that journey remains exactly how you want it to be. We are just bystanders allowed to accompany you, after all.

I just realized I never commented on your hit track.
I don't usually listen to this style of music, but you have to acknowledge the complexity of this rhythm. The sounds are super clear and defined (something I still need to work on, haha), and I especially like it when the strings come in around 1:50. I also really liked another track you uploaded, "Bad Dream."
Given its success... great job.

P.S. I'm sorry about your pet Gizmo. I know what it's like to lose a being who's always loyal by your side. I've dedicated half my life to caring for rescued animals. I don't rescue any more, but I'll stay with the ones I still have (who are very old) until the end.

Best regards, Juan Carlos

Look, Ben, because I dont really listen to this particular genre of music, Im probably not the most suitable person to give a fully accurate opinion. However, its a track with a distinctive style. I really like the vocals and the vocal effects you usedthe groove is great, the bass is very solid, and the drums are tight and well put together. The changes and effects give the track a strong mood, which I enjoyed a lot. Overall, the production is very good. The sound quality is good as wellmaybe its even ideal for this genre, Im not entirely sure. Regards, Chris.

I thought i had commented, ages ago, thats to many pages open, sorry Gizmo, this track is great the structure and build is clever, the changes are all good the vocals are excellent and its a great d&b beat too.
sorry to here about Gizmo, I too had a little Jack Russell up til 13, I'm 60, still miss my little fella, he done everything with me, what a send off tho d&d not some dirge, nice job

Excellent drum and bass track! This should be played in the clubs! Nicely done!

Amazing sounds, very nice effects, and a unique style. Its a very creative piece of work. Regards, Chris

Interesting mix of orchestra sounds and D'n'B drums. Makes groove really rocking. I really like it, thanks for sharing with us!

I love your voice it's so beautiful!

very catchy I love the second part best lots of elements included very good

very great loved it very much

I honestly don't recall the previous version of your song, but I have read some of the comments, including my own. Your track is a beautiful piece filled with remembrance and tenderness, wonderfully structured and performed. Once again, great job Benjamin.
Best wishes, Anthony

Nice! Now I really dig this! Smooth as silk my dude, solid track for sure! That Reggae style guitar transition is dope, and slides into the second verse cleanly. The ambient backing track in the intro, is that ocean waves/beach or something else? Is there a bass line? I hear the kicks off course, but not detecting a bass line. That could be something on my end, wasn't sure if it was there. The only point I have is the vocals could come down slightly, especially in the first verse. I hope I don't come off as picking on you or singling you out. I want to see you grow and flourish, you definitely have something here. I applaud you for trying new things and straying off the beaten path. Vocals can be a real pain and unforgiving at times, I know it first hand as well. Overall, a smooth little track to chill with or play at a summer barbecue. Strong work!

Nice that you make this for Gizmo who will hear this in dogs heaven and say to him self...hey i I recognize this music.
That is my best friend letting me know that he is missing me.
8 years back i lost my best friend,my cat Tazzie and still miss him so much so i understand.
The beat is great and understand also why you put the woman vocal on it.

Awesome track dude! Good beat and sound quality. Nicely done!

I don't want to sound harsh. I understand it's very easy to offend someone these days, so I'll stick to the point. The acapella isn't on beat or in key. The lyrics themselves could have worked with a different concept. The problems are actually very obvious, and my ear can really feel them. If I listened to the music without the lyrics, I'd say the track was pretty good. But I want to be honest. Maybe try working on the music separately first and tailoring the lyrics to the finished track. I think you can do it. You can write music, after all.

A.B.

cool track bro!

Drum n bass was always one of my favorite genres; this track certainly didn't disappoint. A beautiful tribute to your furry friend. R.I.P Gizmo!