BlaqhstarrMusic

You have some nice sounds going on ...could use a bit of bass or maybe some sub-bass hits to fill in that low end that R&B really works well for....sounds fine but I found it quite repetitive with the same basic key prog all the way...maybe a couple of change-ups in the progression or tack in a key change market etc would kick it up a bit...keep it going...you got that basics laid out ...its going to be good...Ed

OK, I liked the track a lot. I agree it probably could be improved by adding a bass to it. Doesn't have to be really prominent in the mix. If this were my track, I'd try just following the root of the backing chords with a single note baseline, with the bass mixed down so that it doesn't complete with the BD.

If it were my track, I'd experiment to see if using different sounds for the backing chords and the strings part might bring something different to the track. i'm not crazy about the sounds, but I tend to like fairly traditional R&B instrumentation. Those are just my reactions.

I do like the track and I agree with centralsdev that it would be really interesting to hear an acapella laid on it.

it's a good feeling listening to this. the synths are sweet and the strings give it a bit of a nostalgic touch. I imagine you are still thinking about an ending or continuing the track. lots of places you could go with it. congrats on your work. best of luck. Dan

nice work smooth track i agree with ssrecords could use some bass give it more depth nicely done good job

Nice track sound real good put some words, to this and make them
real...Could be a solid piece of work, the track is all ready...

Peace...TG.

this is a cool track but,it needs a bass it doesn't seem like R&B without a bass an a cool melody..bass and the melody drives the track ...just my opinion

Peace
Ice man

woah. those hush sounds at 1:05 are trippy! nice work

try put a acplla on it.

the track is great, the composition is good. the only thing i would suggest is the first verse and the chorus need to have a bit more power behind it. maybe even just doing some dub overs can fix it.

Yeah! I like the Harmony!
I'd like to hear this track with a (or some) vocal(s) on it that w'd be great. To achieve a "professional" sounding you might work the transitions between each part.
Equaly you might work on the "dynamism" of the track and I don't mean in terms of levels but by creating "motions". U know "non experimented" musicians would make someting appear in the track by pulling up its volume. But in the real life something can appear in so many different ways that U have the choice : let something appear in Ur track by coming from the left side and rising its volume, a combination of high pass going dowm and coming from 30° Left and reaching the 10° right for example...
Ther's so much way, U can either make stuff appear by sending a sound in a reverb AUX rising only its AUX level (PRE-FADERed) and starting a crosss fade between the direct and AUX volume fader! I like when things moving in the mix and in this kind of music U can make it happen!!
For sure the vocal have its role so..

But good work but, for me it's not finished it has to evoluate...

Cheeerrrssss

this is really good. the layering of the sounds breaks things up on the back of that drum with the solid groove. i would but a compressor on that kick drum with very slow attack and a fast release so the ummmf from it without the hardness. that would probably bring out the bass a little more. maybe add a little air on the eq to make the hats and the top ends of the synths shimmer. and a little bit wider on the stereo too, all seems a little condensed into the center. really good song man, got any plans for vocals?

I like that, sounds rather professional to me! I mean sound-quality wise there isn't anything that stood out in a negative way. Only gripe i'd have is maybe that the track structure and arrangement could use some variations to make it slightly less repetitive after a while.
However it sounds very smooth, well-balanced and the harmonies and melodies seem flawless to me (i.e. didn't hear any weird interval clashes or things like that).

All things considered seems like fine work to me bro, well done! enjoyed listening to this!