have to say the lyrical flow here is very good bro. its got a real nice vibe and good lyrics too. good luck in the compo. u are a front runner for sure
well it wasn't all bad ... you have an pretty good voice hmmm.
if ya want i can help ya contact me at theyouthofficial@hotmail.com and if you contact me i will tell ya the things that's needs to be thighten up haha no probzz
I think that a nice high-pass filter on the Intro vox would sound really cool and add to the overall piece. Also, try not to leave the vocals so dry. And the bass, very nice, but a bit distorted. I would add a Limiter or compression on it.
*applause* this is on some blackstar styles. diggin the groove on this. could boost the volume tho, its super quite. damn, where did you get them sounds!?!? and who b eon the vocals?
i abandoned this song almost a year ago because i couldn't find a singer lol.But yes you can though i would like to remake it to get it sounding better.
Thanks and would you care to here the rest of the project? If not i would understand.But can i ask what is your fav thing about it and what can be done better.Also if you like it enough please pass it on.
Another good track, best thing is your young and have potential to get REALLY good. From a mixing perspective, it could have sounded a little larger, but that will come with time, you have the ability to create good music which is the main thing. Ya, really liked it bro, looking forward to hearing more :)
I'm feeling the flow. The rhythm of the song is very catchy. I would suggest adding a lower octave of the organ to give it a fuller sound. Great effort though!
you tell a good song 20sec into it. love this production. simple, straight, mature with some good rap on it. keep it up man. this is good. still needs a lil bit of improvement on the mix and mastering. check that. but this is great stuff
Nice man!!! Sounds good. Fresh beat nice lil hook. Just the vocals need help master eq etc..other then that I dig it. I agree with dungbeatl too on his POV. Maybe track length could be a bit longer but not necesarry. I like hip hop tracks to be about 3-4 mins or longer depending on the variety and change ups. Goona check ur RnB track too. Also if you need help in some areas. Just ask the fam or hit up the forums on tutorials. A lot of useful information in there. Since I joined this site my tunes have gotten better man and yours will too! Keep bangin!!!
Really like the way this rolls along - got me noddin' my head right away :) You seem like you have the same challenge as me, mixing and mastering is still something I'm learning about. I try playing my tracks in lots of different rooms and in different hardware (headphones vs. speakers) and I can sometimes hear what I need to change when I get away from my usual speakers/headphones. Great track though, I like the way you've structured it - a little smoothing of those rough edges like the others have mentioned and this track will sound like buttah.
Dude, very nice track. Smooth voice and a nice chill beat. Hopefully you plan on doing some mixing/mastering yet, it would sound so much better if it was polished up, but all the right ideas are there and it's very well done..
Generally i like raw sounding music, but just not for this type of track, ya know? Keep em comin man, i'm diggin it :)
sounds great except for the vocal treatment...thru my set its coming in distorted, too phat.. could use a touch of eq, reverb and compression, in that order...otherwise, kickass cut yo, feelin it. delivery confident, good lyric, yeh, keep em comin silver...-dbl-
I thank you for your word. Im working on learning to EQ but i don't have any one to teach me and i thought i compressed it but as i look back i didn't that's my bad.Hopefully i will get better at sound engineering i got my whole group counting on me until then im just trying to make gold out of silver ( oh bad pun im sorry lol)
This is a very nice tune, good music can I just ask if you could look at the vocal sound as it sounds a bit hissy I'm sure you can make them a little more clear as you certainly don't sound like an amature at this. Good work.
thanks and when you say hissy do you mean my word ( i was trying to fix that)and trust im an amateur i've only had radio/tv for one year ( basicly only taught me to run a mixer as far as music goes )and a 1 week sound camp but i will say my teachers were very good.
Good sounding little number here nice beats and synth hits I know you put in the title that it's unmastered I noticed around 25 seconds in the vocals came in a bit sudden and sounded too raw and again at around 1.01 seconds up to 1.19 seconds the song sounded very good apart from the areas I highlighted.This is only my personal opinion. If you would like to take a listen to those points and see what you can do, keep at it guys.
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if ya want i can help ya contact me at theyouthofficial@hotmail.com and if you contact me i will tell ya the things that's needs to be thighten up haha no probzz
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Overall, very cool. I like it.
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but like everyone else says vocals need touching up, I suggest u use light compression on them and put a high cut filter on.
Can't wait to hear the complete song.
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Blume:)
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Generally i like raw sounding music, but just not for this type of track, ya know? Keep em comin man, i'm diggin it :)
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check this thread yo
https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/100979
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