TrippleN97

really nice track !! the only thing sound bad to me is your reverb voice.... which is too long ! she didn t go down on 1rst verse..... but good job

Im a little bit smoother than my brother when it comes to songs in this genre lol. Hes got me trying to practice putting more melodic elements into my vocals so I can improve my singing, Im gonna try and sing a little bit on my solo project. I imagine songs like this one would be perfect for that. Good work man

nice track love the vocals

Hey nice track, I like the arrangement of the keys and vocal loops, the groove is solid and moves the track forward. Nice job,

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This is not at all my preferred genre, but it doesn't have to be for me to recognize talent.
I am curious though, in general, with the instrumentation of your tracks, (this one and others), do you use a lot of loops, or do you create all of your own (or play) from scratch, or maybe even a little bit of both?

What you've built around the vocals is very well put together. Not only in instrument choices, but the timing and even the effects you used. The wind, although primarily in the background, is absolutely a binding ribbon that makes the entire piece. It's one of those things where you don't notice it at first, but if it wasn't there, you'd definitely miss it and the track just wouldn't be as full.
Excellent work, man. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.

this is sick..
love the bassline... vocals fit perfectly. well done all

Great beat. Blends with vocal perfectly. Good job!

amazing beat imo you can autotune vocals for a more modern feel

Great R n B all the way - that duet is beautiful and the music doesn't overpower but allows the voices to engage and flow over the track. Lovely

Dude, the truth is Ive always had trouble connecting with old school Vibe R&Bish type stuff - BUT this is twice now that youve held my attention all the way through a track. On top of that, look at u representing the community bny featuring the community!! good shit man. You have the right idea on how to grow as an artist. To ever say we have learned all there is to learn is the day we become foolish, u know what i mean? I learn everyday from people im grateful to connect with, and Iearn from their music. Especially when its not my genre, so to speak. Anyway, Im glad to see some of the same qualities in u, man. Good work on this one.

You have done a very nice job !!! I enjoyed this track !

amazing song good work :D

I enjoy it my friend !! Catchy and sweet !!!

Cool backing track man, I can imagine someone will jump on it with some vocals soon. Awesome job :)

Nice piano work nice and uplifting tune well done man i enjoyed my listen :)

Thats a heck of a name, my friend. I see where the tripple N comes in lol. Ive really been enjoying ur recent EDM work, so this one took me back down to Earth - not that its a bad thing. Sometimes revisiting old work can be very beneficial to our current work, in unexpected ways. I can hear the stock plug-ins in some ways here, but when theyre used in creative ways, thats not all that relevant, to me anyway. I feel like some good effect work would take this one to another level, especially on that Piano. The panning to a lesser degree, but Valvedriver (The Other Aaron lol) really knows his shit so whenever he offers his advice, I listen with all ears. I can see youre doing the same, good on u bro. I can also see how some live instrumentation could benefit this one, as well, so youre onto something there, too. Ive had a pretty unlikely musical journey to get where I am now, but a large part of that has been as a guitarist in a band that once did small tours, I was also responsible for settingup stage monitors, Micing up the instruments etc alot of the time, and I was a performing DJ for many years after that, so I understand the impact live instrumentation can have on a song. Its not always easy to work them into a song such as this one, but that challenge is part of why music is so rewarding. Im glad to see that youve stuck around this community, and that you also reciprocate and listen to alot of our work, as well. I Hope youll become a mainstay and work with many of us as time allows. You have done some nice work, man. Praise must be earned imo and youve certainly done that, from me and from my brother as well.

Hello TrippleN97, I just wanna say this is a very good pop track with lots of potential for further development...its well done.

Hey man. This is really impressive for stock plugins. I mean, it's impressive overall, but especially for stock.
I think, as far as overall quality, a couple things that may help would be to use some panning and stereo separation on different instruments. For example, the different guitars. Right now, they're all centered in the mix, so they compete for space and make it sound crowded. For example, (and this is just a suggestion. I'm not telling you how to do your mix.), the pluck guitar, widen that out so it's full stereo. Then do the same with one of the other guitars, but only separate it 50%. Doing so, will give them each their own space in the mix so they can be heard clearly, and leave plenty of room in the center for the lead solo. Once you start widening different parts, there will be room for other parts to fill the space so no frequencies are competing. This will give it a much wider and more dynamic sound. Does that make sense? Hopefully I explained it well.
If you like using piano in your work, I suggest checking out Soundmagic's "Piano One". It's a free download, and you have a lot of control over how it sounds. With a little tweaking, it sounds like a live piano. In my opinion, for a free plugin, it sounds great.
Keep it up, man. I look forward to hearing more from you.
Take care.
V.

man I like that piano and melody awesome job

Very nice track! Very fluid and relaxing to listen.

A very pleasant pop tune - great to have in background as u drive Kay

I like atmosphere and vibe of your track. Good job!

Good job bro. It is very noticable how much efforts you put into it. Love it. Keep going bro.

EDM type work seems to really suit you and your style, bro. Hope to hear more like this one

Alright, dude, this is a really well done track. I kno that when it comes to promoting and getting your music out in the world, it can be a stressful and sometimes detrimental experience, I kno its affected both me and my brother at times. Something he said he tried to do was set small sets of goals, and to keep everything he was tryna do in a manageable state, If that makes sense. Sometimes it's easy to spread yourself a little too thin and be stressed, especially for people like me lol. I know we both hope u figure everything out and reach ur goals, man. We've become fans. - Jared aka Vizzio