TrippleN97

Hey nice track, I like the arrangement of the keys and vocal loops, the groove is solid and moves the track forward. Nice job,

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This is not at all my preferred genre, but it doesn't have to be for me to recognize talent.
I am curious though, in general, with the instrumentation of your tracks, (this one and others), do you use a lot of loops, or do you create all of your own (or play) from scratch, or maybe even a little bit of both?

What you've built around the vocals is very well put together. Not only in instrument choices, but the timing and even the effects you used. The wind, although primarily in the background, is absolutely a binding ribbon that makes the entire piece. It's one of those things where you don't notice it at first, but if it wasn't there, you'd definitely miss it and the track just wouldn't be as full.
Excellent work, man. Keep it up.
Take care.
V.

this is sick..
love the bassline... vocals fit perfectly. well done all

Great beat. Blends with vocal perfectly. Good job!

amazing beat imo you can autotune vocals for a more modern feel

Great R n B all the way - that duet is beautiful and the music doesn't overpower but allows the voices to engage and flow over the track. Lovely

You have done a very nice job !!! I enjoyed this track !

amazing song good work :D

I enjoy it my friend !! Catchy and sweet !!!

Cool backing track man, I can imagine someone will jump on it with some vocals soon. Awesome job :)

Nice piano work nice and uplifting tune well done man i enjoyed my listen :)

Hello TrippleN97, I just wanna say this is a very good pop track with lots of potential for further development...its well done.

Hey man. This is really impressive for stock plugins. I mean, it's impressive overall, but especially for stock.
I think, as far as overall quality, a couple things that may help would be to use some panning and stereo separation on different instruments. For example, the different guitars. Right now, they're all centered in the mix, so they compete for space and make it sound crowded. For example, (and this is just a suggestion. I'm not telling you how to do your mix.), the pluck guitar, widen that out so it's full stereo. Then do the same with one of the other guitars, but only separate it 50%. Doing so, will give them each their own space in the mix so they can be heard clearly, and leave plenty of room in the center for the lead solo. Once you start widening different parts, there will be room for other parts to fill the space so no frequencies are competing. This will give it a much wider and more dynamic sound. Does that make sense? Hopefully I explained it well.
If you like using piano in your work, I suggest checking out Soundmagic's "Piano One". It's a free download, and you have a lot of control over how it sounds. With a little tweaking, it sounds like a live piano. In my opinion, for a free plugin, it sounds great.
Keep it up, man. I look forward to hearing more from you.
Take care.
V.

man I like that piano and melody awesome job

Very nice track! Very fluid and relaxing to listen.

A very pleasant pop tune - great to have in background as u drive Kay

I like atmosphere and vibe of your track. Good job!

Good job bro. It is very noticable how much efforts you put into it. Love it. Keep going bro.

EDM type work seems to really suit you and your style, bro. Hope to hear more like this one

Alright, dude, this is a really well done track. I kno that when it comes to promoting and getting your music out in the world, it can be a stressful and sometimes detrimental experience, I kno its affected both me and my brother at times. Something he said he tried to do was set small sets of goals, and to keep everything he was tryna do in a manageable state, If that makes sense. Sometimes it's easy to spread yourself a little too thin and be stressed, especially for people like me lol. I know we both hope u figure everything out and reach ur goals, man. We've become fans. - Jared aka Vizzio

Nice upbeat track great sound nice build up this is bouncing man :)

I think I have written to you again how industry ready your tracks are. 'Moving forward' is a track ready to be heard to the radios for example, I truly believe there is nothing more to do in terms of music production. All you need is promotion. That is my opinion.
Best regards, Anthony

Hello TrippleN97, I definitely agree with the title Moving Forward, its truly a percussion and keys filled journey ahead.....very good vocals and tons of energy in this track, good work.