Can totally hear what the idea is, and there are some nice lead lines within. The issue is the timing of the drums and the rhythm guitar track. Try moving the drum track over a 1/4 note later. Like where you are going with this.
Vocals definitely need to come up in the mix. They are very low on my end, both using speakers and headphones. Might want to change up the drum pattern in spots as well. Has promise though.
dude, you got some skill shining thru and you're not afraid to vocalize either - top qualities ! some of that lead appeals to me too lol, keep it up bro !
ah - how to be worn and shining new - low-key and totally rocking out - music for the parts of the day when the sun is low in the sky and the moon pulls you outside the red skies - strange tidal drumming that really works - really beautiful and evocative music
drums seem a little low. love the guitars talking. i think though perhaps a better mix would help clarify this track. it sounds a little confusing [to me] what you are trying to accomplish. don't mean to sound negative!
That rhythm guitar very good. Very good sir. That lead got that early 80's movie feel. Enough to wake the baby thats for sure! Tight work, only 1 way but up!
Wow. Amazing. Fav. Maybe a live drummer if not already then fills and such. Blues to the core. Lyrics either a good chorus or no chorus @ all just fast, consisted lyrics. No style in particular so it could be used with singer or vocals from a lyricist.
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