RameyRae

Nice1

Left me scratching my head this one.
Not sure where it's going or what kind of input you're looking for on something so short in length and content.
Grow it a bit more.

Welcome back to the site! I was going to let this one pass without comment, which is a rare thing for me. It's one of those moments where I have to decide if I'm going to say what's on my mind, or stop imposing myself on others. So, here it goes...

I guess my initial impression was wondering why the super bowl even matters enough to write a partial song about. Then I started thinking along these lines... Of course it is rigged, it is rigged in order to sell people a way of life. This is obvious from the multitudes of people who say that they only watch the game to see the half time advertisements. Now, don't get me wrong, I hate football with a passion... however, I hate advertisements even more. Anymore, if something is claimed in an ad, one can be pretty sure that the opposite is true.

I had trouble hearing the lyrics here, so I'm not going to judge them. I wish you would have used the "lyrics" area for those. I thought that the backing music sounded very much like a second or third generation mp3 encode, which would have stood out far more if the vocals had been recorded on a better microphone. Still there was great disparity in quality between the two.

From you forum post, it was hard to tell what you were looking for in a collaboration. Seemed like you wanted people to do verses, and also make music. At the same time, this track seemed like more than just a verse. I would think it would be cool if you would do more verses yourself, and bring it to completion, since you seem to know what you want out of it.

None of this is meant to discourage you at all, but simply as an honest comment on the track. Keep at it!

Hi, sounds like you've been through a very touch time. I would love to hear the later version. I hope 2015 is a good year for you. I get to go to New Orleans in April, it's been on my wish list for a very long time. Can't wait to hear the fabulous music. Good luck!

this is an old post of yours that I've listened to tonight, nice piano and vocals, did you finish this? If so I'd love to hear it.

this is really good

Lovin' that piano melody. I see u from Austin. I'm in Dallas. Keep reppin' Texas ma.

_C-DUB_

Haha I totally meant a break FOR the ears.

I do love the piano in this. Did you write that? I do have to say though as far as an interlude goes, it should be an exchange between songs, but also a break from the ears. You should think about how often you have that loop of you saying, "Crazy." Maybe play it twice or four times in the beginning. Also, experiment with different vocal effects so the listener is less aware that they're listening to a loop of you saying it.

My music is by no means perfect, I just thought I would offer advice. I am totally down to collab with you though. Once again, Sick track.

like that piano...
and tha kick just goes hard~

dope interlude
looking forward to more!

Peace from LA

if u looking to colab you can check out my beats and see if there is one you like... I am trying to get a mixtape together n it would be cool to have a female on it.