Aww man, okay, I think the site is messin up. Either that or you converted this at a bitrate lower than 96 Kbps. Because I'm getting alotta buzzes and pops in the playback.
As for the song itself, I recognized alot of the stuff ya used on here and am thinkin that ya need to really go back and rework this song to flow better. Though for your first track it sounds like you're heading in the right direction. Just keep practicing and banging away at it and you'll start churnin out some rockin stuff. Lates!
I have to agree on the length of the track, and the drums. I think its a great track for your first one, you are for sure heading in the right direction. Good work.
on For Words by Sparty
As for the song itself, I recognized alot of the stuff ya used on here and am thinkin that ya need to really go back and rework this song to flow better. Though for your first track it sounds like you're heading in the right direction. Just keep practicing and banging away at it and you'll start churnin out some rockin stuff. Lates!
on For Words by Sparty
on For Words by Sparty