nice... not sure if that sub is just too much maybe if you used a filter to cut the top end off from about 150hz maybe even lower remember that sub is most meant to be felt rather than heard.
after a while the track did get a little mono tone and that piano gets a bit almost hypnotic .. so for me it needs a bit more of a change up... and maybe a cut away from the piano.
the drum track you have in there although it creative does lack power ..now... that maybe because of the sub or it may just be it needs layering up... create three or four instances of the snare using different sounds maybe even layering it with a clap or a rim shot to add texture. your kick I would do the same...layers brother..
having said all of that the track has some interesting ideas..with a bit of tweaking it could be a banger..
this is sick, so much better than my first attempt at hiphop. all the volume seems to be perfect for me , piano is very repetative but fdits well and the bas is just as crunchy as it shud be , i like it alot mate. well produces. :) only one thing i would say is i hate gun shots in hiphop, jus my opinion, thanks . RotenBeats
I definitely can hear a story with my imaginary lyrics. Its good. for an instrumental..make sure you make room for a verse and a hook. I like the drum pattern..turn it up. Turn down the piano a bit. Im LOVIN THE GUITAR..huge fan of guitars. Hey keep up the good work...I definitely like it, but of course everything we do (myself included) can always get better.
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here bro~
just add a couple more layers
on tha beat and you'll have
a hit...
Peace from LA
Peace.
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after a while the track did get a little mono tone and that piano gets a bit almost hypnotic .. so for me it needs a bit more of a change up... and maybe a cut away from the piano.
the drum track you have in there although it creative does lack power ..now... that maybe because of the sub or it may just be it needs layering up... create three or four instances of the snare using different sounds maybe even layering it with a clap or a rim shot to add texture. your kick I would do the same...layers brother..
having said all of that the track has some interesting ideas..with a bit of tweaking it could be a banger..
keep 'em coming brother
Always appreciating feedback and advice.
I'll give the song a bit of an edit soon and try and bring it to new heights :)
Peace
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And I do agree