i like the theme, words,yet you remind me of the beastie boys far as rap style (fun) not grading you but you did ok. i like the verse, funk these haters, im getting paper. I wrote a song called "haters" might put you on if it jumps off
my honest opinion man,and please dont take this wrongly,but the hook at the start of the song (still listening to it while commenting) is not good at all,vocals are to high,its obnoxious,n just honestly wack,in my opinion,now..with that said,ima have my girl do the hook n show u how it sounds see if u like it better,again dont be offended home boi just give u my musical advise,the lyrics are on point the verse is straight on point,i like it,and i want to see more of it,il hit u up sometime when i got it
FOREMAN!!!! WOW HOMIE!!!..LOL I appreciate the shout out and you did a nice job on the verses hard lyrics bro keep it up!!! that was hard my dude, one advice make the verse dry and the hook reverbed...but i appreciate that track bro...ill keep posting my beats vary in style so enjoy the all.
Damn thanks man Ill hopefully be getting signed to when I hear the right deal. Til then just living it up and doing for the music. That means alot to hear that though man you got some skills too I looked at your two
Great track, I've got another looperman version on mp3 and listen to it a lot but this one too is a good version... They seem to each give different impressions this one sounds more serious rap whereas the other one is more of a clubbibg track;
great rap too here & the chorus is really catchy I find...
Thanks man the first version of this was made on a laptop microphone and we redid it and I rap different every time just to have a different sound to choose from. And yeah the chorus was with the beat that we got on here.
aye bruh good shit pretty tight man u got skills i got some advice i mean from my opinion if u wanna know hit me up on my email other than that good job man. 2 thumbs up
Really man I didn't mean to put dub, I just make so many beats an re-edit them, its just habit to click on one your used to. Really made this one to rap over.
Nice work for your first track! I like the synth work on it a lot! The drums get kind of lost in the mix at times. This doesn't sound like dub really, more like electronic or something! Good work though!
try to put a reverb inside, its a channel effect. you sometimes can make breakes between the sounds slighty disappear with it. when you are new, try to work with the metronom to hear where your sounds are in the bar and if they fit to the beat. your kick overlays due to its a sample and you make it few times. try to use the granulizer or the direct wave and put your kick in there when you make the bar less long it will stop right where u made it, so its easier to make a double kick without overlays^^ when you dont understand everything just tell me, i hope i made it understandable for you :D
The melody are verry good but this stop betwen melody parts is sucks and the bass желоцитъ is to high I dont here the Dubstep beat for 3 mouts producing is good ..
Note The Sub Bass must be 2db(decibalс) lower than Kick and for the basic dubstep beat you can use only kick and hard snaere ..
Keep it up
Great track man, nice smooth flow. I'd love to collab sometime, I like to produce hip hop tracks with a electro/dub feel and can always use lyrics on some bars, I'm normally good on the hook. Good lookin out man.
Yeah I just posted a dub/rap song yesterday I like the guitar on the track you have. You have a good start going I just recently started working with FL9 know how frustrating it can be. But yeah man if you get a long enough track let me know Ill record something on it.
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nah jk you did a good job on the bass which was your intention
the other sounds need a compressor real bad though
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great rap too here & the chorus is really catchy I find...
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Note The Sub Bass must be 2db(decibalс) lower than Kick and for the basic dubstep beat you can use only kick and hard snaere ..
Keep it up
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