I like that you actually used music theory and arrangement in your trance song, sometimes I think that is more important than effects and mastering - but popularity tends to prove me wrong. With that said, your song has great melodies, complementing pads and basslines with interesting and original beats, but lacks that final 'zing' you get from mastering.. maybe widen the drums, put them in their own place (bass 10-100Hz) snare/clap (1-3kHz) depending and have some more subtleties in the background to distract the listener's ear and prevent it from sounding repetitive.
Hey i really a appreciated your complement and your honesty i was just gonna master it and leave it as it is but your review inspired me now i will master it and add some kind of subtleties in the background cause i also feel its missing that final zing and does seem kinda repetitive sometimes once again thanks for the review you gave me very helpful information and i will apply.
on dark side by youaintbusy
on dark side by youaintbusy
on dark side by youaintbusy
This is.
http://www.youtube.com/user/UKFDrumandBass
Your track sound great for its genre though. It sounds almost hardcore/gabby/dance.
on Ascending by youaintbusy