axeldota

Good beats man. I can tell ur more of a minimal house sorta guy ;) but if ur after very BIG, venue style techno add reverb to ur beats and synths! it rly needs it. but do it jus for the intro, and add reverb and delay to ur crash, and the music rises and builds and u build tension in the listeners stomach w excitement and then u have that big BOOM! and u drop the music for 4 beats and then u drop the reverb and go back to minimal. Get the idea?? lol but nice man. And check out my tracks alright? :) Thanks

Cool beat,
i like the the whistle thing in the intro, sounds ethnic,maybe not quite as long intro but i likeit ionce it gets into the track a bit
REPHRASE
i love it when it gets into the track a bit

Fav's for sure
theFISHface

this is a cool jumping tune, i love the way its contstantly changing.

Minimal, nice job! Somewhat calming, which is in contrast to most techno stuff.

Fruity 9? like it? thinkin about buying a newer FL studio like 9 or 10...

I love the track anyway, the deep vocals are cool... creepy but cool :)

maybe add some bigger bass throughout it...

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theFISHface

lol ok now i am even scared of myself.
turned the volume up and the vocals and the sound elements are scaring me.
good use man. techno/dub track. awesome.

DextDee

hey, i love this..right up my street. dark and kinda makes you feel a little uneasy - but in a good way! well done i'll be sure to check back when you post new stuff, cheers, 'stu

I'll be the devil's advocate here and hi-five you for the cow-bellish kind of sound, although I see the other posters' point too, it needs to be smoothed in(kinda defeating the original purpose perhaps, but...).

Awesome track overall, fave'd!

It's funny your song says "take this out" and everyone's telling you to take that drum out! I have to say I agree. Nice rhythms though! The bass could use some organization. All that said, I do like this track!

Loud cowbell needs to go or be turned right down.
Organization needs to be priority and a plan should be put in place as to where you want things to be or the sounds to come around.
Once the organization and plan has been put into place you can start working on the mix (another part to be worked on).
Keep at it, it's gunna take a while but you'll get there.
Steve

i think that really obvious drum doesnt belong, sort of distracting.

It's ok, there's room for improvement. I like the beat and the sound of the track. I think the "Take this out" part was ok as well.