Now then mate, reminds me of everlast. If you've never heard Breakfast at whitey's look out for the album. Interesting vocals what was the idea behind the style ?
Pro's:
I like the piano loop as well, and the synth later adds a nice, subtle touch. The rhythm of the verse flows pretty well too. Your voice (assuming it's you) was clean and I liked the very subtle reverb (I think).
Constructive Criticism:
As I'm sure you know, the song starts to lose stem as it goes; it just sounds unfinished which again, I'm sure you're aware of! :)
I would also say that this needs some sort of chorus and perhaps even a bridge or something to break it up as it gets very repetitive after a while.
The production sounded clean though and although I'm not near my monitor speakers, it sounded well-put-together.!
Not bad, I rocked it, burt one for the car, Yea man maybe a little more time in mix down, It had a nice ICP feel there at the end. Rap rock is ok if done right, and your doing it right keep em coming playboy. I'l be listening. the boneman.
OMG!tHE cat in the hat came back!LOvely.g.x Love the clarity of this production!Gr8 vocals and gr8 music!You had me from the start..loving it!But it just ends in the middle...dont stop,this must keep going..
Composition wise it is ok! The mix is not great but of course this is a demo ... ;-) I think it needs a little bit more production too (it gets a bit repetitive after a while). Anyway, that's what I think ...
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I like the piano loop as well, and the synth later adds a nice, subtle touch. The rhythm of the verse flows pretty well too. Your voice (assuming it's you) was clean and I liked the very subtle reverb (I think).
Constructive Criticism:
As I'm sure you know, the song starts to lose stem as it goes; it just sounds unfinished which again, I'm sure you're aware of! :)
I would also say that this needs some sort of chorus and perhaps even a bridge or something to break it up as it gets very repetitive after a while.
The production sounded clean though and although I'm not near my monitor speakers, it sounded well-put-together.!
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John
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John
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Keep on keeping on, mate!
/pmk
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I love the piano !
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LOL...............who cares
Great vocals, very interesting track: Shows a lot of creativity and talent.
Well done, My Friend
John