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dam dude this is awsumm anymoree kikasss yaaaa thankks uu kiiking itt

woah this is awesome I'm not much of a metal fan but damn this good stuff

The track is great, my friend, I hope to see you on looperman again soon.

Keep the hits coming

John

Cheerio Killers. Ha! that makes us all cereal killers.

yea,good track.. but how it reminds of early Metallica????

I really dig the way you put this piece together. I think the bass is just sik. Keep it up my friend!

brilliant work!!!!!
very powerful, a very interesting style ....
pretty unique ...
indeed you can be proud of this tune!!

cheers, rei

You have done a very nice job building this progression. This is indeed a great way to compose and provide your band with material to work on. Love the break down and I imagine some deep lyrics over the theme. I would very much enjoy playing bass or guitar to this tune. The Gods of Metal Salute You. Now go Shred for a Better World. ****4 Stars

only thing i can suggest to make this track better than it already is (unbelievable i know) is mebbe you could add some screaming vocals. that would dig hardcore.

eh man i like this track it makes me wanna be in a pit a take dudes out if you know what i mean/ check out some of my songs youd like them

Oh, I really like this ^^ KudosX3

This kinda reminds me of early Metallica, good job with this one.

good job man, this track sounds great!

The machine gun beat and helicopter riffs in the beginning make this track really heavy without resorting to cheap death metal techniques. Good job.

There's some great advice here, and I also think the lyrics and voice are pretty good but I would turn up the bass and mid ranges. I wanna here more kick from the drums and a heavier, more sustained sound from the guitar. You have a straight-up metal riff just waiting to break out. Also, consider investing in a better mic.

very impressed

never new it was possible to make metal on a computer and for it to sound so real

This is great! Best thing I've heard on this site so far!

not your flagship piece, but it's pretty damn good. i like all the changes and effects, some more than others but still very awesome work!

slamming pulverizing growling grooves, it's awesome! i also liked the quirky beat at the end and some of the scales, almost reminded me of my own style

pure awesomeness, this is one of the most entertaining tracks i've listened to on looperman!

fair play that last breakdown is EPIC!!!

I wasn't expecting a ballad. It sounds good. I agree with eshar - your voice is pretty good man. You can even the volume on your vocals with RMS type normalization and then boost the volume. I'd give 'em a dark reverb too to match the eerie feel of your song. Awesome song, dude!

Once again, I'm throwing up the horns and slinging my head. Nice riff for the intro too.