Jimski

Personally, I king of liked the bass vocoder. Liked your track.

John

Sorry. Don't really like the vocobass. Beat is cool.

Not bad for a first attempt. I definately hear a few things that can be fixed but its all been said already.

So instead I'll focus on the good. I really like sounds you used, and the drums sound nice. Keep workin on it! -Gabe

Peace Love Jesus!

Pretty good track you made, but some sounds just don't fit. Try relistening to your track and if you hear sounds you don't like chaging with others. Very good as a first try. Keep it up!

btw I think you were using FLStudio. At least some sounds from it.

Cool, better then my first attempt at the genre. I like the runnin beats and the bass synth. Just lacking a good low end (sub)and some leveling EQing...etc... Other then that it's a great start! I like the title too! I'd like to hear some of your future works and your progression! Keep at it bro!

Blume:)

umm i like the track but your levels are off ever so slightly in this track i would turn your drum loops up the bass at the drop sounds very computer made but the track is not bad i get the concept its your first dnb track and also i agree with what numberjack says i think you should play with your levels a bit and make it sound better because it could be a killer track with the right level of mastering done on it keep them coming bro

some good ideas... not bad for a first try... you need to try adding in a sub and mixing it up more... your drops need to be padded so it would go crash sound...smooth pad or dark pad or whatever rather than silence... you should have a listen to some of the dnb artist here at the loop...rollagee or travis huckins get some ideas these guys are great at this genre..anyway nice first try I have heard alot worst brother...keep 'em coming

Not perfect,but not bad,its sounds very nice.
But i dont like "Crash" Sound and other two sounds.
8/10