i like what youve got so far. great use of the vox. i like the melody...wonderful keys elements. i think we're missing a bass line in the beginning. the switch up around 2min was delightfully unexpected. it feels more polished...more cohesive than the first 2 mins. but again, i think that might be something as simple as the lack of bass presence, *(your placement fo the [everything i do] vox is bordering on off beat. making it come in just a tad later would put it on beat, but you might have ebeen going for that slightly off beat vibe).
i think this is definitely worth working on. really enjoyed what youve got so far.
great work!
excellent song mate. really got me dancing. i agree with djabel about the beeps. i would actually get rid of the beeps and put something else in, but thats just my personal opinion. they work well in the chorusy bit, but not so good before. and maybe a better transition into the chorus. but it is a really really good track- has a lot of potential.
I love deep house so i had to check it out!
The beat is great but the vocals get kinda annoying...
it's alright but not my fav
Keep the beats coming ;)
(please check out my 2 new tracks as well since you liked my other tracks as well....)
hi mate nice track, wasnt too interseted at first till i heard the latin piano!! really picks up then!! maybe you could expand on that!!? nice work anyway!!
listened to this song a few more times. i don't think the vocals are actually out of time at all. and if they are, it fits really well. its a great chillout house track- love it.
Hey man, out here in my perimeter i am digging your track, looking at your tunes, i had to check this out, gotta love the doors and stoned immaculate by dub syndicate is quality also. nice work recording those lyrics and they compliment the overall sound, seems good things come from boredom. good job.
Thanks man yeah I'm a huge Doors fan... At first i didn't know if I liked it i may have added too many effects to the vocals... But whatever it is what it is... lol
This track sounds great. Just mixed very good. With so much going on everything comes through in the mix so good. Loved the horn stabs and the perc all in it. There's also like these very ambient synth touches that bounce in and out. They make you focus on them and they draw you into this beautiful audio texture(don't know if that makes sense lol). Then the very ambient vocal textures just blend it all together. Choice tune :) Cheers.
Thanks for the insightful review ... Yeah I have been working on my mixing and mastering latey trying to get a really smooth blend of sounds mostly done through fading the tracks... This song has my vocals and two other looperman artists so I though it came out pretty nicely... Thanks for the Review...
could you send me the track without my vocals please and i'll have a play about with it. its just a some parts, most of it is spot on. just needs a few tweaks. i struggled with the vocal part in my lapdance song, so its probably my fault anyway, ha. the part at the end when just use segments is excellent, leave that bit in.
i really like this, has a great feel to it. my vocal track sounds outta time at some parts, unless that was your intention. anyway, its a really good tune, well done.
Hello! it's me Elina ; ) I listened to the track just now! I think you need to add more effects to my vocal (for example Reverb , delay...etc.) Try to add effects, it will sound better, trust me) And then send me the track already with vocal effects cuz yeah, i really like your track! :) thank you! : )
I don't know the technical differences between many of these sub-genres, but since I've joined looperman, I've become a fan of 'deep house'. This is a great track. Faved it. I don't suppose you could enlighten me as to the difference between house and deep house? I agree with edge7 about the bass. If you brought in some kind of low bassline at about 3min, it would bring more depth. Is most of this made from pre-existing loops, or did you sequence it yourself?
well, you're right when you say that there are similarities between your track and Requeim For a Dream. you packaged everything great,strings,piano,orch..,beat.
Nice job
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i think this is definitely worth working on. really enjoyed what youve got so far.
great work!
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The beat is great but the vocals get kinda annoying...
it's alright but not my fav
Keep the beats coming ;)
(please check out my 2 new tracks as well since you liked my other tracks as well....)
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Would you be ok with me playing during set-changes at Looperman day here in Nashville?
http://https://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/95423
let me know.
Peace!
d2d
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really cool stuff:))peace
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very cheerful, very upbeat, and a nice relaxing feel at the same time.
Love it.
Rabbit
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Nice job