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Dang you sung insanely good. i think i feel a tear drop....
Keep it up and whatever you're going through...hope you get through it.
~RAWQK

This would probably best be uploaded as an a capella.

Aside from that, the track is great and your voice is beautiful.

Faved and downloaded

John

ps, if I add some music, I'll let you know :-)

you have REALLY great voice!Keep up the good work

Alen

I listened to track again. I thought about what to do to it. If you wish to collab. Send me an email to atdoctorfunk@yahoo.com I looked at my profile I haven"t been a loop guy for my music productions. I'm in washington state I don't know your time zone hope to hear from you

I like the music and the track. The vocals show a lot of talent but you need some plugins to enhance your voice. Your voice has sex appeal that the all us males want from a female vocalist. If you want to collaborate with me on this track just hit me up. I hope to hear this when you finish it can be great. Keep going strong!

Nice beat but sound quality needs some good leverage especially if you're willing to go further with the rnb genre - Keep it up!

I like the music and the track over all but you may want to re-think the vocals. I'm not tryin to be mean but if you want to sing on your own tracks you are going to need some plugins to help keep you in tune. Take it from someone who sounds like a dying cat.

Wowwwww!! U should make this available 2 download. Automatic Fav

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hey thats a cool ass song i love it well im a d.j. so hit me up lol i love ur music keep it up an call me some time an let me hear you sing;) well my name is albert aka bert bert take care an wish to hesr from you someday...

I love the rolls in your voice. You have great vocal control. I am sure a few people will be asking you to collab very soon. Beautiful voice - bravo ! - Bilbozo

Hey was good miss lady ay you got some great vocals i could use someone like you for our tracks keep in touch(money foldaz) you can watch us on you tube

*sniffs* girl u can sang, this song brought tears to my eyes.

what improvewitherror said. you have a great vocals, we just need to get you some fresh instrumentals. i have your email, i'll send you beats i made for you to play with.

Good vocals, you should look for some tracks that need vocals and collab with someone. You have a good voice.

this is dope. great vocals, good solid topic. im looking forward to hearing a beat added to this.

i love you voice ma`. i just emailed you.

Email me vmo361@yahoo.com or else just update and make it downloadable and ill just get it that way I have a simple idea to get it started ill send it to you once I add your vocals and we can go from there

I like these vocals I think I can make a track that would fit this, do you mind?

really captures the feel of trying to sleep when yr sad and pissed off - when tomorrow only offers a return to the same fractures of today. great lyric, vox, and composition - all respect.

im going to have to agree with everyone else, great vocals! they truly are outstanding, with alot of heart and emotion put into the lyrics. i kinda like the eerie sound behind it, i think it fits nicely, kinda like an interlude track on a CD that leads to another song. i think the only thing that could make this better is if there was a little more energy. the track is great as is, but i can imagine it with a sort of intensity that really lifts it off the ground. it still feels a little like your in your comfort area, but i can tell that your slowly pushing your self further through out the track, but its kinda like an elevator in a building of 10 stories, but only goes up to the seventh floor.

im not criticizing, but theres just something itching under my skin that tells me, you have a real talent, and that even though this is really good, you could really do so much better. i love your voice, and i actually loved this track, but i bet you could do even better =) you should let me know next time you put out a new track, im really interested to hear some more of your work.

great sound, dope sound

by default...and with your permission, i want to remix this with you???? i go by mistamista. so this kind of fits something that i want to do. so if your open to it, please do contact me at mistamista87@yahoo.com. you can check out my tracks that i have here on looper to give you a better idea of how i am with lyrics.

I agree with BrokenScythe....your vocals exceed the track. If you have some acapellas post them up and while I am certainly no RnB expert, I would like to use the vocals for a track.
Cheers,
Trax

Pretty much everything Fayz said.
You know something simple that would clean this up is just that high hat ma, just get rid of that off triplet part. Let it ride out on 8s.
Again your voice is very beautiful. You have a grip of potential.

this is nice. Theres a lot of heart in it. Your voice is very beautiful. I think you should get someone to produce something just for this vox. I dig the feel of the instrumental, but I think your voice can be complimented better by something else.
Great track, I really enjoyed it.

hey i like the track, you got a really great voice, not so hot about the instrumental. the instrument is kinda dull and occasionally off-beat. but i think you saved it with your voice.

but i feel they need to be pushed forward more, and cut some of the low frequencies out of it and boost the higher frequencies. also a little tip i learned recently is that if you take your vocals and then make back up vox for it, in either the same tone, or higher or lower in a harmonic combination, it will really add presence to the vocals.

one last thing, you have a really good voice! but it feels like your not confident enough with it, it really seemed like you were pretty deep in your comfort zone, and thats alright while your starting out, i get that problem alot im not perfect either, but compared to me your 100 times better, and you really need to embrace that and have more energy and confidence in your voice. just throwing that out there,

otherwise, i liked the track, and your vocals really were the only thing that made me keep listening