This could be made better....It is a good start but you need to make it sound more clear. The sawlike synth is taking over the whole track too much. The drum pattern is very good!
The bassline sounds pretty cool but does not mesh well with the lead synth that comes in. You should try boosting the bass at at about 80 khz and the kick at about 60 so that they don't occupy the same frequencies. You may also wanna try sidechaining the bass to give it a pumping feeling. Just some suggestions.
Nice work for your first song! It sounds like you have a lot of potential! I like those droning noises in the background! Nice bass line! Keep it up man!
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Well Done
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