Great track. The only thing I was missing was a bit more bottom end on it. Seems like it is a little thin on the bass side of things. Other than that, it's a pretty solid effort. Nicely done.
Great Metalcore back here Good Job man Really like it think if you add some clean vocals just in break ups to much with the song and do more lead guitar parts other then that it sound awesome for me keep the good work
love the track..music is right on to me the voc need to be redone a few times get some other takes to get that perfect take.. but thats just my op. its a good start going in the defenitly right diretion. keep it up my friend.
hey great track, even my friend who usually has nothing nice to say, thought it was pretty good, very well done, just needs a little more work on the vox, try layering something darker, what i do is i take the vox, copy and layer below, then lower the tone, turn it down a bit so that they dont compete and add to each other, but thats just me, other wise well done
It has a NWOBHM feel to it but heavier and darker. Wicked work on the vocals man. Love the drums and the riffs, whoever is playing guitar on this is insanely talented. Solid track. Good work!!
As for the track, the vocals are a bit too loud for my tastes. Bring up and BEEF THE F*CK OUT OF THAT GUITAR.
It's metal right? Metal ain't supposed to be so tinny! You've got something righteous sitting in a shell. Break out of it and show us how great and how well you can move us!
This has some great transitions, and I agree with Kikajon on the voice. I really like it. You have some serious screams going on. But the mix itself sounds abit muddy, and the vocals sometimes 'drown' abit in there. But good job on the melodies and progressions man. Looking forward to hear more from you :)
The more I use GarageBand I realize how great it is. And this track is evidence enough it really sounds well. I also like the sound of your (?) voice.
Anyway, one think you might consider applying is the AUMulibandCompressor (not the standard compression) effect under the edit tab to even out some of the volume differences in the vocals. It works miracles and I use it quite frequently, vocals just sounds better with it on.
/pmk
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Keep up the good work
John
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Faved (let me know if you make it available for download)
All The Best
John
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Now, as for the song...
I am not usually a fan of this style of music, but it was very well done. Sounds kinda like something Rammestein would have a hand in. Good job.
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Well done
John
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-Gabe
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As for the track, the vocals are a bit too loud for my tastes. Bring up and BEEF THE F*CK OUT OF THAT GUITAR.
It's metal right? Metal ain't supposed to be so tinny! You've got something righteous sitting in a shell. Break out of it and show us how great and how well you can move us!
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on Forward March by lilyn
Anyway, one think you might consider applying is the AUMulibandCompressor (not the standard compression) effect under the edit tab to even out some of the volume differences in the vocals. It works miracles and I use it quite frequently, vocals just sounds better with it on.
/pmk