Listening to your track again. No new ideas or criticism here, just thought I'd tell you that you'll get a lot more feedback on your tracks here if you set them to "Featured", then leave a comment on someone else's track. That puts your track at the top of the list on the "Tracks" page. People will see your tracks there.
on Untitled yet by BoneSaw
Take care.
Evan
on Untitled yet by BoneSaw
I like the riffs you have here! The high lead sounds kind of fake, but I like what it's doing. The stair-stepping backing line is very good, too.
No real criticism here. Though repetitive, I enjoyed it. I hope you find the vocals you're looking for.
Evan
you right, that lead is not really good, i will correct it as soon as i can. I'm still in learning phase, so every critics are welcome....