ok listening and reviewing here.. nice intro.. hats sound cool.. try some non tonal fx that might beef out the intro abit.. maybe some strings to compliment this would go nicely throughout.. like the guitar.. its just missing something in the mid to low freq area imo.. some complimentary sounds wouldnt go amiss.. it sounds quite singular, and needs beefiing out in the mid to low range.. nothing a few synths and strings cant take care of.. just a thought man.. hope this helps
taking a serious listen to this one. hats sound cool. Is that kick panning left and right fast on every 2nd hit? I thought that was clipping for a second. I think the percussion should have a few more parts. Your parts are clearly defined, I just dont think they stand out very much because they are hitting with the percussion a lot. I'd suggest breaking the guitar instrument down and have it hit off beat so as to create a dynamic. I like your part at 4:16 the most because you pull a lot of the instruments out. Definitely want to redo the clap part. Id say just have it hit on the 2 and then have it roll at the end of the measure. Break each instrumental down. Its got a good feeling but needs a little more. Re upload and Ill check it out again!
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