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Alcraine

Alcraine

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Omaha, United States
Joined : 20th Aug 2010 - 15 years ago
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JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 26th Jun 2011 21:08 - 14 years ago

on Dont F With Me Major by Alcraine
Sounds like it has potential, but its very muffled.

Keep them coming

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
thanks for the review. I'm thinking of discarding this dont really like the quality dont have access to change this anymore
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 24th Jun 2011 13:17 - 14 years ago

on Going away by Alcraine
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Dunno why, but this kinda reminds me of a mix between Linkin Park & The Fray. And truth be told, I'm thinkin that this should remain as is (somehow think that vocals would detract from its coolness). I'd also like it if this were longer, as I feel that it has real huge potential. Kinda thinkin that it could morph into some sweet 5-10 min Trance mix (all it'd need then are some sweeping pads). Beyond that this baby is good to go. I just wanna sit back n listen to it. Cheers!
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 24th Jun 2011 13:17 - 14 years ago

on Dont F With Me Major by Alcraine
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Just sounds like it needs to be remastered. Pretty crazy the way its comin outta my speakers. Makes me think that its being played underwater. Keep workin on it mate. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Just something quick i did no even thinking bout going back thanks do
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 21st Jun 2011 19:32 - 14 years ago

on Unleashed by Alcraine
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Yeah mate, I've had that happen a few times. I call 'em "Happy accidents" or "Ghostin cruise control". Ya get in that zone and a sorta tunnel-vision thing happens (just like in Biker Boyz). And though I dig this tune, I don't think its quite at 'banger' status. Don't get me wrong, the composition rocks, but I'm thinkin that it needs just a lil extra juice for that excitement kick, ya know? Like periodically throwin some effects (say Flanger & Bit-Machine) on the keys, same thing with the horns (ie, reverb w/diminished echo). And the drums're def thumpin, though if it were my mix I'd consider throwin on some deep sub-hum sine bass to go along with 'em. Otherwise, this is a really good foundation. Keep bangin on mate. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
I hear what your saying fam. Some effects would really bring juice to this. There is some stuff in this miss that I don't like the bass line gets distorted.Yea i'l be putting some deep sub great idea.
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 21st Jun 2011 19:31 - 14 years ago

on Bring it by Alcraine
Art's such a funny thing. The critique/review process is almost as complicated as its creation. Don't say enough and the art doesn't improve, say too much and things get lost in translation (info overload), be too light with ones words and they are oft blown off or overlooked, be too hard with the words and they can be taken the wrong way (out of context & offensive). And perhaps the most frustrating part of it all is that its all opinion (and are as varied as the cloths we wear, food we eat). I've grown to take it all in stride these days, taking in the bad with the good. I also don't let myself fall into arguments as its a simple matter of considering the source (either the item-in-review or the reviewer).
Sorry for the rant/ramble there, let's talk about the track.
As I see it, this def has potential. On its own it does sort of miss the mark (because of its brevity). For that I'd suggest stretching it out by about 3x its current length. Won't talk about the mix-down process as I've discussed it enough already IMO. Work on both of those things (and maybe consider adding a vocalist, though I dunno, I kinda like this instrumental as is) and you'll be golden. Keep bangin on mate. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thanks for the review. I love rants lol good info. Btw the track you went over after this thats the remake of this
justslim
justslim 20th Jun 2011 04:15 - 14 years ago

on Times Up by Alcraine
dope syncopated rhythm. I would pull this one up and layer it a bit. maybee add a bass drop but dope track..
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thanks for the review. This is on my next to revise list right after I finish Raw
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 19th Jun 2011 14:13 - 14 years ago

on Wake up by Alcraine
Fantastic. Love what you did to it.

Faved

John

I have a new track up you might like "Dazed and Confused" ;-)
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Always a pleasure for you to stop by John. I'm like 40 percent done with this one. Need to take the levels on the beat box sample.I also need to make the chorus really hyped up anyways I'l Check "Dazed and Confused"
TSBeats
TSBeats 17th Jun 2011 12:44 - 14 years ago

on Save Ur Self by Alcraine
i like the kick pattern ,but try add more dubstep/dnb wobbles in there
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 15th Jun 2011 12:45 - 14 years ago

on Wake up by Alcraine
This is the one you wanted me to scope right? Alright let's check this puppy out!

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I like the mix of houses on this (new skool with old skool). Can see this going either way vocally. Though because of the low-heavy groove of this mix I think that it might be better suited for a female MC (unless you could find a dude that goes at a higher register, like Q-Tip or somethin). Still gotta watch yer levels on the mix-down, but otherwise this is a really solid piece. Keep bangin 'em out mang. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Crap. . . the upload I put didn't go threw you listened to the old one . . . mind reviewing this again ? :) thank you for your time.
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 15th Jun 2011 12:34 - 14 years ago

on Save Ur Self by Alcraine
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Haha, that voc-sam is nutty mate. Dunno how I feel about it (probably wouldn't mix it myself, but to each their own). Really diggin the panning treatment on the drums (keen loop too). And that's prolly the most solid piece of this composition. Kinda minimal in its treatment elsewhere though, but that's cool. The only thing I'd suggest is that ya consider throwin on some bass elements to this (unless this is just somethin you were havin fun with, not bein serious). Def interesting approach. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
This was a comedy piece lol I could make it serious very easily do. Take the voices in this. Add some good bass lines and then I'm set thx for the review do :)

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
MCLA
MCLA 14th Jun 2011 23:05 - 14 years ago

on Times Up by Alcraine
Add another 1 or 2 riffs and yeah, with some good rap over the top of it your on to a winner.
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Whats wierd is that this is one of my most liked track lol. Also the track that Ive been ignoring for so long. But latley ive been remaking my old tracks so be on the lookout :)
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 14th Jun 2011 05:42 - 14 years ago

on Ringing Stage by Alcraine
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This is just my opinion, but I'd consider ditchin that canned-applause, because it usually seems cheesy if the song isn't actually being played live (and most folks can tell, ya know). Diggin the subtle bass & drums on here. Though if it were my mix I'd bump 'em up just a tad (but not too much, don't want 'em overpowering the strings you got goin on). Nice abstract HH piece ya threw at us mate. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Now that I hear this again it those sound cheesy.
Recently I switched from Fl to Ableton live intro. Maybe I will sample this later. Anyways the track I'm reworking is "Raw" if you could give me some input on that one it would be awesome. Thanks for the review
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 14th Jun 2011 05:41 - 14 years ago

on No Idea Where Im at by Alcraine
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No offense mate, but the Xylophone (?) on here had me thinkin back to the Seasame Street record I had when I was a kid (kind of a cool flash back there). The beats're nice, as are the bass, but if I were to suggest anything it'd be to add a secondary bassline to this (somethin like some basic piano keys, but set around C2 or C3). And think about throwin in some variation (breaks & lulls, isos & different pairings {like the bass & drums only}). Otherwise, yer pretty much on your way with this one. Keep bangin on!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Hahah what those Play 2 now... mean lol. Anyways this is Kinda trashed already. Maybe I will rework it by using some sounds from here but I have no plans for this. Right Now I'm reworking one. Haha the Xylohpne. I like the sound of it. Some tracks like this one I aimed for a child like presence.
DonnieVyros
DonnieVyros 13th Jun 2011 01:10 - 14 years ago

on Times Up by Alcraine
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Pretty serious stuff going on here. Def a head bopper, but it is a show stopper? Perhaps, but first I'd recommend stretchin this out to be about, say 1:15 longer. I also would like to hear someone flowin on this. Has anyone sent you anything like that? Anyways, cool jam. Lates!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thanks for the review. Actually im going to record something to it when i get the time and a decent mic.
LuckyFlaush
LuckyFlaush 11th Jun 2011 13:03 - 14 years ago

on Unleashed by Alcraine
I received your message... hmmm, good work here, fat and well balanced, also very original and strange. Good job!
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thx for the review mate
digitalSKYY
digitalSKYY 4th Jun 2011 14:11 - 14 years ago

on Memories by Alcraine
Pretty cool! Seems a tad bit low, has potential

Nice one

Cheers
Kenny Lee
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thx for the review ill check you out

keep Hustling

Valdo
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 1st Jun 2011 22:46 - 14 years ago

on Wake up by Alcraine
Very nice beat, my friend, there's prob quite a few people who would jump on this if they heard it.

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Like who who? I sorta remember making this track haha. I have no idea how i sampled those I don't remember. Thanks for the review
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 1st Jun 2011 22:43 - 14 years ago

on Night Cart by Alcraine
This sounds great so far, definitely hope you flesh this baby out.

Keep them coming, My Friend

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Yea my favorite part from this track is the hi-hats. This is just something simple so I wont get rusty I'm in the middle of buying a new laptop for production/DJ/ and video editing any recomendations?
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 1st Jun 2011 22:35 - 14 years ago

on Going away by Alcraine
Starting with Minor's piano and Rat's guitar is a great way to start for sure. Like what you've added, as well, really fine job on this track, my friend, a piece to be proud of.

Faved

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
I had this one put in a movie for my teacher who was leaving it made her cry. Minor and rat are great.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 1st Jun 2011 22:30 - 14 years ago

on Going In by Alcraine
I think you have a really good start here to what could be a very good track. I'd start with the levels. After that, some sweet guitar :-)

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Yeah I'm currently revising this one. I'm not that good with the guitar maybe I'll search for some loops.Thanks for the review

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 30th May 2011 03:49 - 14 years ago

on Save Ur Self by Alcraine
Lol, I love this. Great sense of humour.

Faved

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Yea I defiantly laughed the whole way threw when I was putting in vocals.Thanks for the review

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 30th May 2011 03:47 - 14 years ago

on Dreaming by Alcraine
Short and sweet. Hope you decide to flesh this out more. What you have so far sounds very good.

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thanks fam, This is just a simple beat. I don't know if i'l be able to flesh it out. Maybe i'l sample it or something.
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 30th May 2011 03:42 - 14 years ago

on Unleashed by Alcraine
An incredible cinematic piece. Definitely very image provoking. The piano was encouraging images of the exorcist while the rest of the track brough images of an intense battle between good and evil.

Faved for sure

John
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Thanks buddy, I'm always glad to hear. You described this track really good. It's what I was going for :)

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
NoSoMoDo
NoSoMoDo 29th May 2011 03:37 - 14 years ago

on Unleashed by Alcraine
man, you're there...beautiful sound - guessin' the man gave you the melody just before you dropped off - you nailed it...superb...
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
Yes very much indeed. Thanks for the review. I will check you out.

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
SERGEJ77
SERGEJ77 28th May 2011 21:54 - 14 years ago

on Unleashed by Alcraine
Yes, I know the Feeling...
Good track!
RGDS
SERGEJ
Alcraine
Alcraine replied Unknown
It's that moment where all that hard work pays off. Thanks for the review. I will check you out. Until then keep doing what you do.

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
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