I like the beat that you have going on there, very tribal. I like this track. It is a really pleasant listen. Well arranged and produced as always seems to be the case with your tracks.
Nice to know you liked this track. I am still learning and new to this music composition as such. Compliments like that definitely boosts my confidence :) Certainly this is an opportunity for me to work really hard to entertain all my listeners. Thank you again for all the kind words!
This is another great composition Camy! Your stuff is very reflective and deep. A lot of contrasts within the piece. You just kinda seamlessly flow in and out of good and evil!
First of all, I thank you for reviewing my track. The difference between this track and other tracks is that I first wrote the lyrics and later composed the song. This song is very personal to me. The song is based on a true incident happened in my life!
PS: I am not a native speak, and English is not my forte. If there are any errors, please forgive me. I am learning english :-)
I like it. Maybe some strings like a cello doing a nice counterpart to the foundation...idk. I like at how it rains softly in with that change up around 2:20... the underlying hook set in the back. It's nice girl, don't be so hard on yourself! Walk away for a little while and come back to it on a rainy day and BOOM, it'll hit ya like a ton of bricks!
2:19 isn't a bad length for a track, but I understand Nap's wanting it to be longer. It leaves you wanting more, which is a great thing for a track to do. Great combionation of sounds very skillfully put together.
nice sound.i'm really impressed with what you did with this track...you said you weren't happy with the track.what do you think its wrong with it?I think it's cool,it has nice melody and rythm..i just expect the track to pick a different rythmical pattern as it progresses..just a thought.
I am not able to figure as what exactly bothers me with this trac, however, one of the strong feeling I have about this song is that it is flat from the beginning to the end :(
A very beautiful piece. The only suggestion I would make would be to fade out the end. Is that you speaking in the beginning? If so, I love your voice and would like to know if you would like to narrate somethning for me in the not too distant future.
I lived in Ontario for a year. On major Mackenzie. Down the road from Wonderworld and pretty much across the road from Wonderland Foods.
Thank you very much for your reviews. Nice to know that were from ON too :) Please let me know how I can help :-)
Yes, It is me who is narrating at the begining. The reason I did not fade out at the end is because I wanted to reflect the abrupt end of a true story. I first wrote the lyrics and posted here==>undaunted-souls.blogspot.com only after that, i composed the music.
Once again, thank you very much for the reviews it means a lot to me :)
I am glad you were able to relax with my track. Yes, I created it in less than 30 minutes! As I said, Vijayanagara Dynasty is a must see place in a life time, the pillars in this ruins has music to it, very inspiring place! Thank you again for the review!
Thank you very much for the review :) Yes, I did that in less than 30 minutes. And pardon my english, I am not a Native speaker. Once again, Thank You for the review!
I am Glad you were able to relate to the song :) You may want to visit my website for the complete lyrics. http://undaunted-souls.blogspot.com/ Once again, thank you so much for reviewing my Tracks :-)
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~Nap
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let more PERC. speak on this track
i enjoy your music.......
cheers
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u a great artist
cheers
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i like this arrangement
it´s ´n absolutly fav for me
cheers to the artist
Camy
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say its good or bad.
its just ok at this point.
As for that stuff near the end or middle you might want to work on that .
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The entire song was made on garage band, with existing loops. I did not play the piano in this song :)
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Well done
John
Nice to know you liked this track. I am still learning and new to this music composition as such. Compliments like that definitely boosts my confidence :) Certainly this is an opportunity for me to work really hard to entertain all my listeners. Thank you again for all the kind words!
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Honestly this is a very good track,excellent piano,I like it!
Maybe try to make more contrast in drums,just a thought..in any case, great work!!
Keep up
9R
Sure, will do another version with more of drums. Thank you very much for the feedback:)
Regards,
Camy
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First of all, I thank you for reviewing my track. The difference between this track and other tracks is that I first wrote the lyrics and later composed the song. This song is very personal to me. The song is based on a true incident happened in my life!
PS: I am not a native speak, and English is not my forte. If there are any errors, please forgive me. I am learning english :-)
Thanks,
Camy!
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Another Awesome Camy Track
All The Best
John
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I am not able to figure as what exactly bothers me with this trac, however, one of the strong feeling I have about this song is that it is flat from the beginning to the end :(
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I lived in Ontario for a year. On major Mackenzie. Down the road from Wonderworld and pretty much across the road from Wonderland Foods.
All The Best
John
Yes, It is me who is narrating at the begining. The reason I did not fade out at the end is because I wanted to reflect the abrupt end of a true story. I first wrote the lyrics and posted here==>undaunted-souls.blogspot.com only after that, i composed the music.
Once again, thank you very much for the reviews it means a lot to me :)
Regards,
Camy
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I also enjoyed this track,you do this for less than 30 minutes,
It was awesome!
really relaxing track, great work!
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Very well done
John
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